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by Anonymous

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by tazz31707/05/12

THE END OF ANY ERA OR SPECIOUS BEING

signifies a waste of time, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by demure10107/05/12

Like Beowulf

We're still willing to fight the dragon - but at last we find our heart's not in it any longer; the truly important things do not lie in s claching of arms and amassed treasure. Oh, those collectors...

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by DawnJ07/05/12

Man, you're good!

Demure, you read this poem like the pro you are, and saw its connection to "Beowulf". This is a found poem FROM "Beowulf", which I wrote as a model for my students, before they wrote their own. It is based on one of the last digressions in the poem. I wrote a little note to this effect, thinking it would appear at the beginning of the poem, but it hasn't. In fact, I don't know where the note is. I am, however, thrilled that you saw the connection! Bravo!

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