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by Anonymous

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by tazz31707/05/12

THE L.P.M. SURROUNDS

the aurae of one or two in ectasy. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Anonymous07/11/12

just another

Boring poem about orgasm. I do not understand these petit selections of words clumped together and tha the "author" think they are poetic. Look up the last 500 poems with this title, they are all alike and boring, plain and simple. you can do much better

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by demure10107/12/12

superb

alliterative sensuality!

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by DawnJ08/03/12

To Anonymous

Funny you should say that, as this wasn't a poem about an orgasm! Perhaps if you looked for more than orgasms in your reading, you'd understand that there is more happening here. Perhaps it's your reading that's boring! Never assume you have all the answers.

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