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by tazz31707/05/12

TO COMPARE LEAVES WITH CLASHES

leafs drop and die....clashes come and go. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by demure10107/05/12

this reminds me of Prufrock:

For I have known them all already, known them all:
Have known the evenings, mornings, afternoons,
I have measured out my life with coffee spoons [...]

It's all about the bitter and the sweet in life.

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