All Comments on 'A Walk in the Dark'

It's a very good start to a story. I look forward to seeing where it leads.

I definitely want to see more! Well done.

please write more

Interesting premise... will there be another night? Perhaps some oral tease? I hope so.

Kinky kinky kinky! Would like to know more about why he set up this dare for himself. If there was some connection to the girl, maybe (did she overhear him planning it?). Love this story.

Great beginning, add a few more chapters.

Fantastic, fantastic. I just love the thought of her giving her her tiny panties to wear. And the edging was sexy too. Very hot.

Damn that what hot...more please.