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pretty nice
good short story hope you have a second chapter in mind
I did enjoy it....
But it could have been built a little more, and there is the possibility of unforced sexual slavery to her brother.
Just a thought.
But nice storyline.
just plain dumb
enough said
Liked it
It has just enough of the down and dirty quick fucking, we guys sometimes crave, it has possibilities for a much longer detailed relationship between the siblings. Good one, THANKS.
Immature At Best
Reads like it was written by a horny fourteen old virgin enrolled in remedial english classes.
Perhaps if he was a bit more loving towards his sister, she would be more helpful around the house
She would be a better pardner, if he gave her all of the cock she wanted.
He should have loved on her while he was fucking her to make it even better for her.
Who knows, she may be pregnant with his baby now and he will have to take care of her, which wouldn't be a bad thing to be taking care of a horny 18 year old girl.
More
You should write more like this.
how was it bad?
i liked it, it gave a thought though my head and plus people saying it looks like it was written by a minor is pretty stupid even the title says it was gonna be like this
CONTINUE!!
Please i want to know what happens!!
boooo
short, poorly written, crap like this is why people are leaving the site
trash
just the typical trash from an underage virgin that will never get any pussy for real. DELETE AND BREAK YOUR COMPUTER SO YOU AREN'T TEMPTED TO POST AGAIN.
agree with the bad comments
i really have to agree with all the bad comments plus add that there is no such thing as beautiful DD tits. DD tits are saggy and ugly beautiful tits are between a large A and a small C and have to be firm NO SAG. absolutly nothing beautiful or sexy about sagging tits you just know they will be down around her waist by fifty.
Awesome!!!
All tits are beautiful... If you say only firm tits are beautiful then you are a shallow asshole!!! Well to the writer of the story i must say i like the story very much but personally the only thing i would have wanted out of it was more to read. The story was to short so if you have more to add on this story maybe about what happened if or when your sister got pregnant that would have been awesome!!!
Piece Of Crap
And that is putting down a good shit. If she acted like that why didn't the parents punish her? She would have already been knocked up by eighteen the way she acted. Stupid waste of my time.
Horrible!
This is a horrible story. Who would treat a girl or woman like she was dirt???
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