This is going to be one of your best. I like story line and your character development continues to be superb! The alternate character paragraphs really draw me into the story. Not unusual, but you do such a good job of it! Please keep the chapters coming.
The anticipation thats inside of me is well horny making I love how you left it here in my own way I love stories like this with no or little sex coz my mind can just go crazy with the what if's. And the way you developed the characters made it so easy for me to get lost in my own stories for hours
Thanks for writing such beautiful work angel look forward to the next piece
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Another Hit!
This is going to be one of your best. I like story line and your character development continues to be superb! The alternate character paragraphs really draw me into the story. Not unusual, but you do such a good job of it! Please keep the chapters coming.
Can't wait
The anticipation thats inside of me is well horny making I love how you left it here in my own way I love stories like this with no or little sex coz my mind can just go crazy with the what if's. And the way you developed the characters made it so easy for me to get lost in my own stories for hours
Thanks for writing such beautiful work angel look forward to the next piece
Yep, I'm Hooked Too!
Great going!
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