... Short and sweet, but without much body. Personally, I would have liked to have heard more about his day, than hers. Still a very good overall story and definitely above average writing, just hope this chapter was productive for the overall story.
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Kinda Like a Filler Chapter...
... Short and sweet, but without much body. Personally, I would have liked to have heard more about his day, than hers.
Still a very good overall story and definitely above average writing, just hope this chapter was productive for the overall story.
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Back to Opposite Worlds Ch. 07 or
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