Looking forward to how the story pans out, ignore the comments about cheesy and corny it is in the romance section , and that is what you are setting up
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Anonymous07/07/12
Love it cant wait for the rest of it. Brilliant work. Where are the endings to your other stories?
Im wondering about the end chapters to your other stories.
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Anonymous07/07/12
gonna finish it ?
U posted parts of this on another site , are you actually gonna post a complete story or is everyone wasting their time reading something that won't ever get finished?
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Anonymous07/07/12
negative comments
ignore the negative comments. If you entertain even one person( and I'm entertained)
then the story is a success
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Anonymous07/07/12
Keep up the good writing.
I find myself looking for the next installment when I visit the site. Your characters are engaging, secrets waiting to be revealed linger in the subtext, and you haven't fallen back on the stale overuse of foul language and Hustler forum descriptions. Take your time but finish the story eventually. Congratulations to whoever your editor is, this is one of the few Literotica stories that doesn't contain misused words, typos and grammatical errors.
i am very much enjoying your story i find it witty and charming and am looking forward to the next chapter
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Anonymous07/07/12
Enjoying it ...
At the beginning of Chapter 1 you said this is a 'finished' story, so please be sure and post all chapters ... I have enjoyed your Romance stories in the past and was pleased to see you posting again in this category. I only read the romance stories from a select few authors on this site, you are one of them. Me thinks this is just the kind of story Izzy would enjoy reading. Thanks for posting this one.
my comment wasn't meant to be negative in any way.Old doesn't mean bad at all especially these days when a lot of stories are"the less said,the better"(now I sound like my mum!!Yikes!!!!!).
So yes your story may be old and corny but I love it and give it 5 stars which is all that matters,yes?!
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Anonymous07/08/12
IT IS NOT CORNY - IT'S SWEET:)
We almost never get a sweet story anymore. Izzy is not someone who needs to be rescued, she just needs to get healthy. She may be a bit slow on the romance department, but sheesh she reads romance novels and who knows what else all the time. She has probably read the kama sutra and would like to give it a go. LOL I like this story. Keep going. Maybe Izzy could ask Daniel to instruct her on the things she has read in the modern version of the joy of sex. JUST TEASING!!!! Do what you do, this story is worth the read. Thanks, can't wait for more.
PLEASE!! The first 3 chapters to this story is fantastic....I just wished Daniel would quit acting like an ass towards Izzy and would act nicer, then I am sure she wouldn't go and hide in her shell. Maybe Daniel needs to read one of Izzy's romance novels to get ideas on how to romance her....I can't wait until the next chapter!! ;)
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Anonymous07/08/12
finish sentimental heart
i like this story, but you've left us hanging in sentimental heart. Please finish that soon. I wanna know what happens in the end. Don't leave us hanging for this story either. :)
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Loved it
Looking forward to how the story pans out, ignore the comments about cheesy and corny it is in the romance section , and that is what you are setting up
Love it cant wait for the rest of it. Brilliant work. Where are the endings to your other stories?
Im wondering about the end chapters to your other stories.
gonna finish it ?
U posted parts of this on another site , are you actually gonna post a complete story or is everyone wasting their time reading something that won't ever get finished?
negative comments
ignore the negative comments. If you entertain even one person( and I'm entertained)
then the story is a success
Keep up the good writing.
I find myself looking for the next installment when I visit the site. Your characters are engaging, secrets waiting to be revealed linger in the subtext, and you haven't fallen back on the stale overuse of foul language and Hustler forum descriptions. Take your time but finish the story eventually. Congratulations to whoever your editor is, this is one of the few Literotica stories that doesn't contain misused words, typos and grammatical errors.
very enjoyable
i am very much enjoying your story i find it witty and charming and am looking forward to the next chapter
Enjoying it ...
At the beginning of Chapter 1 you said this is a 'finished' story, so please be sure and post all chapters ... I have enjoyed your Romance stories in the past and was pleased to see you posting again in this category. I only read the romance stories from a select few authors on this site, you are one of them. Me thinks this is just the kind of story Izzy would enjoy reading. Thanks for posting this one.
Please....
my comment wasn't meant to be negative in any way.Old doesn't mean bad at all especially these days when a lot of stories are"the less said,the better"(now I sound like my mum!!Yikes!!!!!).
So yes your story may be old and corny but I love it and give it 5 stars which is all that matters,yes?!
IT IS NOT CORNY - IT'S SWEET:)
We almost never get a sweet story anymore. Izzy is not someone who needs to be rescued, she just needs to get healthy. She may be a bit slow on the romance department, but sheesh she reads romance novels and who knows what else all the time. She has probably read the kama sutra and would like to give it a go. LOL I like this story. Keep going. Maybe Izzy could ask Daniel to instruct her on the things she has read in the modern version of the joy of sex. JUST TEASING!!!! Do what you do, this story is worth the read. Thanks, can't wait for more.
MORE.....
PLEASE!! The first 3 chapters to this story is fantastic....I just wished Daniel would quit acting like an ass towards Izzy and would act nicer, then I am sure she wouldn't go and hide in her shell. Maybe Daniel needs to read one of Izzy's romance novels to get ideas on how to romance her....I can't wait until the next chapter!! ;)
finish sentimental heart
i like this story, but you've left us hanging in sentimental heart. Please finish that soon. I wanna know what happens in the end. Don't leave us hanging for this story either. :)
getting exciting!!!
...and i am getting excited.
the chapters are promising a lot. can't wait for the next one. :)
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