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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
more please :)

Great read

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

I wish it was Thor and Black widow ;)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

amazing. Sequel would be great.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Cut the beginning section, the end was fabulous though :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Funny and hot story

I really liked it, imagening Scarlett Johanson as Black Widow it really turned me on

MaitreNuitMaitreNuitover 11 years ago
Hot stuff

Really a good alternative to what actually happened in the movie.

But in the end, Thor had to intervene anyway to rescue her - not from being smashed to death but to be fucked into pieces.

Nice fic... Keep on

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nearly wrote a very similar story

But your take on it is very well written, so I guess it saves me some time!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good,,,,,,but

A good story, but I had to give it only three stars since you didn't take it all the way between Widow and the Hulk.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Loved it. But i only rated it three of five stars because it didn't finish well enough.

Thor came in and ended it without realising. She didn't have to be fucked to death. Just more story with Black Widow Satisfying Hulk in return would have been nice.

Think about adding another scene. Maybe a third chapter without Thor coming in. Or her and the hulk after the world is saved. Think about it.

You did a good job. Well set out. No spelling mistakes. Would really like to see more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

good job. write more. u r good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

great story...I'm glad Thor interrupted cuz I can't imagine how dey would have sex!lil

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Bukkake

I'd love to see a little more. Personally, I'd want her stretched out by his cock, but at the very least, I wanted him to jack off on her and drench the little slut from head to toe.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

What a fantastic read. Please write another chapter!! You got talent.

DariusxifyDariusxifyalmost 10 years ago
sweet and realistic!

Awesome read lol. Glad there was nothing involved in hulks dick cos it would have been too huge. Enjoyed the use of thr tounges and fingers. More PLZZZZZZ!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Brillant

Purely brillant

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
he should have screwed her with his cock.

It would have been really hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Hulk would have fucked the shit out of black widow that busty slut sexy

I would literally lick and fuck her boobs.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
AHG!

im so hard itd fab

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
black widow the slut

It`s a very good one but i would love to read a story of natasha romanoff being controlled by scarlett witch and being her sleeper agent at s.h.i.e.ld and doing her bidding and being a total slut.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
BW should've been raped!

You should've delayed Thor's entry! You should've let the Hulk rape her!!! Aaaaaaah........... Destroy her slutty cunt with his monster cock!!!

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