All Comments on 'Foot Slave Ch. 02'

Love Toni's casual control of Paul, she's convincingly confident and obviously has a deliciously devious mind.

I did find the perspective a little odd though - it's first-person, but it seems to switch strangely into third-person during the Paul/Phoebe scene. Not a huge problem, I just found it slightly jarring.

Looking forward to seeing what's in store for Paul!

I really like how Paul is being manipulated. I didn't notice the 1st & 3rd person issue & I re-read it based on the 1st person/ 3rd person comments. I think that is written 1st person from Toni's pov. Her scenes are 1st person and the scenes w/o her are told 3rd, since she isn't present.

Great continuation of the story, looking forward to reading the next chapters!

Could I please know where to find the original story?