by PlainJane12
This is fun!
Lots of twists. Emotional confusion. Engaging characters who all seem to know more than they are letting on. I can hardly wait for the next segment
I love it, well done! You're doing such a great job, please please continue! Thankyou for all you've done so far.
I'm not even trying to keep up anymore. So many plot twists, I don't know whats happening. So im just gonna stop makin predictions, and read it when updates come out, and let it all happen.
My chief complaint is the badass thing. I hate it. It takes me out of the story every time i see the word. It doesnt fit the setting, its overused, i just hate it. Otherwise, good work