All Comments on 'Michelle's Revenge Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Well done!

I din't know how this one could get any better, but I'm sure we'll find out soon enough!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
He wants it

Just found out my guy wants anal. Planning a night like this. If it turns out half as good as this story...

testdrivertestdriverover 4 years ago
Michelle 1 & 2

Fucking hot !

AJeyeAJeyeover 4 years ago
Very hot story

Great work, but, I too hate that word, a little too much detail on the bath and shower scenes. Slowed the story for me. Character development good for both of them. And now needs at least one more chapter. Keep it going. Thanks.

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