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The Kiss

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by Anonymous

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by demure10107/07/12

But then, if heaven were permanent there'd be nothing to yearn for left... Nicely done!

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by Anonymous07/10/12

Your attention to detail is wonderful. Keep going and I look forward to reading more... I loved it.

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by tazz31707/10/12

PULLING AWAY AND OUT OF TOUCH

while awaiting the next chapter that night, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by JWren08/07/14

Frustrating

The swift, short ending is so apt and frustrating.

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