As usual well written, erotic story well up to the authors usual standard. Love reading your submissions.
This brought back some early memories of my own, but mine never made the level of these.
Keep it up.
Unfortunately I am spoiled by the revenge stories.
The eternal boring flow of the willing cuckold stories the consequence and revenge stories cut sometime. So we should be glad when we get some clueless husband stories.
However when I read these stories I can think how the husbands could do revenge on the cheating wives or the loverboys.............UNFORTUNATELY I AM SPOILED BY THE REVENGE STORIES. Against my obession I would like to say the Author writes such stories as this instead willing cuckold stories!
When we read clueless stories we (revenge story fans) can imagine what sort of revenge scheme would be the best against the cheating wives. Howvere the willing cuckold stories there is not this possibilities...........However I prefer a revenge or consequence story to this, only this is better than the willing cuckold stories are..........Because My fetish is when the husbands change the cheating wives with newer wives/mates/girlfriends!!!!! Your story can give me idea for this. Jo's husband is an extrem fat guy and I think this is the main couse he left his wife for others. My imagine the husband gets gymasy and slim diet to lost fat and this diet would be succesful when his youngest child would become 18 years. This time is when the police and the tribunal system started to punish the infidelity violance same to other violances. So the husband would do his gymnastic and slim diet the youngest child graduation. He would do debt for the restaurant and would hide (in gold, diamond, etc) the small money and he would divorce his wife. That time the Vetnam War time and he (without fat) coud start a new marriage with a diligent young South East Asian wives (newer 2 children) in a other city..........................When I read it I imagined this, but I am not to far the true life, because let us look at this guy from N.C. and his video on the You Tube:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bIvJms3wlaY
T he North Carolinna guy text on the video:
I was married to an American bitch for 18 years. She got away with fraud and turned my oldest daughter against me. Going through divorce in my mid 40's I decided to look for love in a country that was family oriented. I married a beautiful 18 yr old Filipina and now I feel young again and in love!!!
BTW: What I imagine of Jo's future? I let it for others..............
I am not advocating sex outside of marriage. The truth is Ashley Madison would not have so many avid members if there were more satisfaction in some of those married bedrooms. Keep writing it like you think is correct and I'll keep on reading your stuff.
First, this would theoretically be better as TWO shorter stories. There is only one link and, due to decades of gap, even the protagonist should have changed during this time lapse! Both Sweeties might as well have a 'Fuck Me' tattoo on their foreheads! No point, in an erotic story, wasting time with seduction...let's get on with the sucking and fucking! The writing is not terrible, but it IS often stilted!
In the second phase, our protag is married with two children. End of reporting about his domestic life! Despite his lie to Sweetie2, he has been screwing several ladies in the company. Dedicated and faithful father? Nah! Is there ANYONE in this tale (either part) to actually LIKE??? Nah!
Since Fat Bob in part 1 and Barely Mentioned Hubby in part 2 have NO involvement in the development of either part of the story, and Protag's wife is, if possible, less involved, this might as well been in Erotic Coupling or Anal, but it would still be fairly marginal in ANY category!
3*
It seems that any time that I write a story in the category Loving Wives there are more comments and negative voting than in any other category. I have avoided this category for awhile and it appears I should avoid it all together. Thank you for your honest feedback.
English
Good story.
As usual well written, erotic story well up to the authors usual standard. Love reading your submissions.
This brought back some early memories of my own, but mine never made the level of these.
Keep it up.
Unfortunately I am spoiled by the revenge stories.
The eternal boring flow of the willing cuckold stories the consequence and revenge stories cut sometime. So we should be glad when we get some clueless husband stories.
However when I read these stories I can think how the husbands could do revenge on the cheating wives or the loverboys.............UNFORTUNATELY I AM SPOILED BY THE REVENGE STORIES. Against my obession I would like to say the Author writes such stories as this instead willing cuckold stories!
An explanation is my fetish
When we read clueless stories we (revenge story fans) can imagine what sort of revenge scheme would be the best against the cheating wives. Howvere the willing cuckold stories there is not this possibilities...........However I prefer a revenge or consequence story to this, only this is better than the willing cuckold stories are..........Because My fetish is when the husbands change the cheating wives with newer wives/mates/girlfriends!!!!! Your story can give me idea for this. Jo's husband is an extrem fat guy and I think this is the main couse he left his wife for others. My imagine the husband gets gymasy and slim diet to lost fat and this diet would be succesful when his youngest child would become 18 years. This time is when the police and the tribunal system started to punish the infidelity violance same to other violances. So the husband would do his gymnastic and slim diet the youngest child graduation. He would do debt for the restaurant and would hide (in gold, diamond, etc) the small money and he would divorce his wife. That time the Vetnam War time and he (without fat) coud start a new marriage with a diligent young South East Asian wives (newer 2 children) in a other city..........................When I read it I imagined this, but I am not to far the true life, because let us look at this guy from N.C. and his video on the You Tube:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bIvJms3wlaY
T he North Carolinna guy text on the video:
I was married to an American bitch for 18 years. She got away with fraud and turned my oldest daughter against me. Going through divorce in my mid 40's I decided to look for love in a country that was family oriented. I married a beautiful 18 yr old Filipina and now I feel young again and in love!!!
BTW: What I imagine of Jo's future? I let it for others..............
walterio YOU WRITE WHATEVER YOU WANT
I am not advocating sex outside of marriage. The truth is Ashley Madison would not have so many avid members if there were more satisfaction in some of those married bedrooms. Keep writing it like you think is correct and I'll keep on reading your stuff.
Forehead tattoos
First, this would theoretically be better as TWO shorter stories. There is only one link and, due to decades of gap, even the protagonist should have changed during this time lapse! Both Sweeties might as well have a 'Fuck Me' tattoo on their foreheads! No point, in an erotic story, wasting time with seduction...let's get on with the sucking and fucking! The writing is not terrible, but it IS often stilted!
In the second phase, our protag is married with two children. End of reporting about his domestic life! Despite his lie to Sweetie2, he has been screwing several ladies in the company. Dedicated and faithful father? Nah! Is there ANYONE in this tale (either part) to actually LIKE??? Nah!
Since Fat Bob in part 1 and Barely Mentioned Hubby in part 2 have NO involvement in the development of either part of the story, and Protag's wife is, if possible, less involved, this might as well been in Erotic Coupling or Anal, but it would still be fairly marginal in ANY category!
3*
Not a good story category
It seems that any time that I write a story in the category Loving Wives there are more comments and negative voting than in any other category. I have avoided this category for awhile and it appears I should avoid it all together. Thank you for your honest feedback.
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