Mom Strips Naked for Nude Day Ch. 01

great start

Very good start to what is potentially a great story! Can't wait to read more!
James

Hey Susan

I'm with James.. Great start to the winners circle..Even lil enis got about half fat.. I'm looking forward to the finish..

A new discovery

and a new favorite author.... great style and great work!

A good start to an interesting storyline

Mom needs to really read some of the stories her son wrote about her and have an open mind about how he feels about her.

Her son needs to be honest with her and tell his mom that he really does want to have a love and sexual affair with her, and he is infatuated with her sexy body.

I certainly hope that he convinces his mom to live out some of the fantasies he wrote about her.

Thanks for the read

great start

please continue ASAP

Enjoying this story as much as any of your previous stories.

No that isn't quite correct . . . this story line is more interesting than previous stories and lets one's imagination (as indicated by BigDaddyRich's comments) run ahead of your submittals.You have all of us, your fans, looking forward to reading the next chapter/chapters. The maximum amount of stars for my vote. Continue on, please, post haste!

Interesting

Makes me want to read the next part.. to see what happens, or rather how it gets to the promised part.

Love your style

I like the approach to the story so far and will continue to follow

Nice start

I like a story with real possibilities and not just hey lets jump in bed.

I like your style and love where the story may be going.

Hook needs work.

The start just didn't grab me. Nice writer, good work, but not 'hooky' enough.

You have definitely piqued my interest with the first installment..

Mom.....

What a terrific piece of writing. Sounds like a lot of the author is in her lead character, Jason. Very clever direction you're taking this story...right to the front door of Literotica.

Insenced over incest.

Great lead in story Susan.
I have to see where you take this, and the 'outrage' which so pertinently appears to be closer to home than comfortable.
Great writing and tension.
Thanks

Great Build-up/Series!

Well worth reading the entire series. Great job, SJP!

A real exiting story

When reading this story my libido increases to the limit and when I had finished reading I also had filled a condom to release the pressure on my genitals.

im lovin it!!!

I love it so much

Hi Susan
I love it so much. I wish I could you more then 5 stars. I would give you 10 stars for Super Hot & Sexy Stories. Your Stories are Super Hot like you are.

Wyndell

Good Beginning

Excellent story for the beginning of a series, makes the reader very curious about what will happen next.