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Pictures in the Park

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/10/12

Reliving a Fantasy

This was well written and quite believable in its progression, I was a little disappointed in the ending as it was a little too "matter of fact".

The story reminded me of a series of photoshoots I did as a young and horny budding photographer. The model was a good friend and our photo sessions were really a slow and progressive mutual seduction. This story brought back a lot of the memories and feelings I had more than 40 years ago.

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by Erotonaut07/11/12

"Hope you don't mind, but I made a copy of this one for me."

I take it from this that she hired the photographer, and the arrangement was that she'd keep all the negatives? For a model portfolio, a keepsake or as a gift for a lover / spouse? It would have helped set the scene better if that had been clarified at the start.

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by Anonymous07/12/12

Pix at park

I liked the detail....the setting down of the camera, filtering in the noise and becoming aware of the painful rock. All very believable. i also like the feel it left me
With and no not the obvious one..

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by watchmewatchu07/13/12

to my readers

Thank you for your comments. The detail you speak of came from the real experiences. As for the negatives and the prints I kept them all. I had them done for myself. Thanks for reading!

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