All Comments on 'I Love You Too'

by DonScorpio

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Very Erotic

Very good writing and very erotic. I suggest, respectfully, that you write a sequel and explain how and why Cassie and Maddy decided to give such a great birthday present. Hopefully, it is not in exchange for a threesome that Cassie wants with other men, though.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Good Erotic story

I really enjoyed it... Just wondering why it's in Loving Wives?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Pick a tense

And stay with it. I got whiplash trying to keep up.

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 11 years ago
surprise party

Doncha just love a good (nay, GREAT) surprise birthday party?

(Betcha the PTA attendance will improve, now!)

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