All Comments on 'The House in the Valley Ch. 02'

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LadyPartsLadyPartsalmost 12 years ago
The modern male Scheherazade

Really great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Different

Its a good different, looking.forward to reading the next chapter

ResidentWeavilResidentWeavilover 11 years ago
Another dark disturbed tale

But I find Bart very interesting and really want to know how it comes out.

LeFrog08LeFrog08over 10 years ago
Quite entertaining

With a nice control reversal. I hope to see more of this series and I'm curious to read how this situation will evolve.

I'm also following other excellent series by this author.

Kudos for all this work.

phil2213phil2213over 10 years ago
Wow!!! What originality and genius.

Unbelievably entertaining and fun story with a mix of erotica. This is inventive genius at its best. Thank you for the adventure. You are extremely talented.

BalddudesrockBalddudesrockabout 10 years ago
Twisted

This is seriously sick, twisted shit. What does it say about me, that I find it incredibly HOT?

chipmonk9chipmonk9almost 10 years ago
great

They should get a dog to fuck them as he's fucking them they want a pet and get fucked two birds with one stone.

Nemo18Nemo18about 9 years ago
Day three

So what happens next?!?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
interesting

It makes me think of that old movie "Arsenic and Old Lace".

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

There has to be a twist at the end of this tale of lust threats and compulsion. Roll on chapter 3.

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