Beauty

Luv it!

and looking forward to more.

This was really good!

This was an excellent piece!

Wonderful

More, more, more

Wow!

Very creative. Enjoyed it

Wonderfully sweet! Even if somewhat bitter-sweet! *****

You write quite well - no grammatical errors that I noticed, with a very natural smooth flow to it - as well as what looks to be a really good story! It is such a nice and unexpected treat to find writers, and there are a few, on this site who value their readers enough to pay attention to the whole writing package. I see you're utilizing the recent "Zombie Apocalypse" scare as subject matter for your story. Interesting... I really hope you decide to extend this chapter into a full-fledged, full length story. I say five stars on your first chapter!

I hate anything dealing with zombies, but

I loved this --thanks

Some one watches the walking dead.

My favorite show to appear on television! I've always want someone to make a story like this...I even thought to make one myself but I decided not to. Lol atleast someone had the courage. I'll definetly be watching for updates. U have a new fan.

Loving this story.

Even though

This may be your first submission, it's obviously not your first written piece. Very well done and so utterly complete for a 1 page submission. Can't wait for more from you!

WOW..

Nice story. Is this the end? Will there be more? Loved it!

Awwwww

this was too cute!!! love it!

That was awesome!

I have no idea what was completely going on, but I gather an apocalypse and dead people crying and love..... altogether it was a very cute story. I loved it and wouldn't mind more lol

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LoL