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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/14/12

Bearly coherent, almost illiterate nonsense.

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by Anonymous07/19/13

Nice, but needs help!

A nice little story, ruined by many typos. Needs to be proofread by someone who is familiar with the English language.

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by alexcarr07/19/13

Typo's?

I have checked and this has been passed by my editor?

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