Consequences Ch. 01

great start

Keep going, 'cause it's starting out very interesting.

Tease...

Gave it a 5 because it was pretty hot but you left it too short. Interested in the next episode so we'll see. Thanks for sharing.

sounds like max is going to use her age and innocence to control her which sounds more like rape not something that is fun for all when she has no basis for a real choice. no thanks mind fucks dont sound erotic to me rape is rape whether physical or mental. which ever the case is what gives the incest community a bad name.

Great Ch1.

You should keep this going. Personally I cannot wait to read the next part.

It's a 5'er

Good flow and good content. Keep going.

Tease

I agree it's a tease story that's why I only gave three stars

Such a good story!!!

I loved this story I really hope you come out with chapter 2!! :D

Anon

Absolutely fantastic story!

Mindblowingly awesome

YOU WIN THE INTERNET.

Poster number 3

It is good to see yout you sand by your statement to a degree that allows you to post anonymous.

Great story. Submissivenss and inexperience does not equal rape victim.

Damn girl!

Wow, just wow. I am not into this genre, but I love your work, and saw this was a new story you were dedicating some special time to. I decided to give it a go. Wow girl, I am hooked on Uncle Max! You've done it again!

Very nice

Loved them all, And yeah, poster #3 Maybe you should instead of jumping the gun and going all rape cry, just read the rest of the storie's and find out for your self that your wrong and a little BDSM is not rape in any way, especially when she fuckin love's it.

Poster #3

Nope, no rape here, simple mindfuck; inexperience on the part of the young girl, and ignorance on yours of what is BDSM, i bet that you jacked off on it, came so hard it made you spazzz out, but you felt so guilty about that that just had to get all sanctimonious and shit... Can t stand the sight of your kind of hypocrit!

The fact that incest has a bad rep is because we don t frighten at the fact that it's a taboo fantasy, whereas, you jerk off on it, cum, and then post as if the story disgusted you when it turned you on...

i disagree

I disagree with the previous comment. I am looking forward to reading the other chapters.

Brilliant Darling. Just brilliant.

I've read the whole series and came back here, at the start of it all to congratulate you. It was intense, hot and utterly thrilling. Thank you love.