by Wildfire427
The quality of writing is superior to most submissions on this website - and the story is extremely effective and erotic (at least if you're as hopelessly perverted as you doubtless to be looking at anything in this category to begin with...)
This shithead belong in the cell with all other criminally insane scum. I will not even vote on this vile garbage ! 1* is not low enough.
Reading this story was very confusing for me. You wrote from the brother's point of view and then his sister angle. You switched so often that I had a hard time to follow the story.
I really love this story. Nice build up and he takes what he wants and makes his mother his whore. I can't wait to see what and he makes her do.
I wish my son was this forceful and took what he wanted. Maybe someday.....at least in my dreams. For now I'll have to settle for him peeking at me.