Missed Connection Ch. 06

This was a nice update. And thanks for the new releases. Living in France, we don't get too many new movie releases unless they're extremely mainstream. I'll be watching films for the remainder of the day. Thanks again.

Good but...

It was a good update but you could have gave us something better for as long as we waited.

love it and i cant wait to read more about this couple

I'm disappointed in this chapter, was looking forward to it, while it was nice she opened up to him I felt like it was lacking something. Please don't have her going back to Sean.

More ple and soon

Getting tired of these short chapters

its already chapter 6 and now Jackson finally says he's going to 'make his move'... I like your writing but for the love of God please give us a real scene not just half of one. But hey your the author and you have all the right to do whatever the hell you want. But as a reader its a turnoff. I like these characters even though Kassidy is a little flaky.. patiently waiting for the next chapters.

Sorry...

I write at the pace that my life will allow and I submit chapters as I go to keep the story alive. Because of the complaints of short chapters, I guess I won't update until I have a pretty lengthy chapter... I can't guarantee how often I will update. Sorry I wasted everyone's time.

-Bizzy

Forget them Bizzy

Your a great writer and people sometimes don't realize the huge amount of time it takes to conceptualize, write, edit and re-edit a good story needs. Keep writing and updating when you can, we love reading your submissions.
-p2p

Say what!

u didnt waste anyone's time, i prefer short chapters to 2months b4 any oda updates. U're amazing, cos coupled with dat fact that real life interferes, u're not daunted. Still find d time to write n update...
U're d best. Xoxoxo

Personally

I like the way you take time with your writing because when I'm reading it does feel rushed to me.. I'm just happy you let Kassidy give Jackson a chance can't wait for another update..

I meant doesn't feel rushed.

5!

With Kassidy taste in movies I am surprised she didn't run Jackson away....to jump into my awaiting arms....lol! These two are so ying and yang but somehow compliments each other because each have something the other lacks. Plus I love that you made Kass age show throughout this chapter I think it is refreshing reading a person acting like their age instead of being way to mature and serious. Oh don't feel bad about the short chapters, I know people complain but I don't mind them sometimes you don't want to read a story with 2+ pages besides you update often it isn't like we are waiting months and months for a new chapter.

Good

Despite Kassidy's love of Tyler Perry movies, I liked this chapter. Could have been longer but still good.

They seem like polar opposites (she's in college, he already has a career; she's a little messy, he's very tidy) but I think they could work out as long as they're able to meet in the middle.

Just Saying

I can't wait for the next chapter!! I love that you aren't rushing into the sex department with these two I love them!!

Great update looking forward to see what happens next thanks!!

they watched a tyler perry movie? really? really?

*Grumble*

What the hell is wrong with Tyler Perry movies...? Geesh!

Wow (:

Great story so far, hurry up and finish it! I honestly dnt really like seans character but the entire plot is so well thought out that it works i guess. Great writting

Great Story....

love it....can't wait to read more....loving the description of the Jackson...the solider. I love a man in uniform!

More soon more soon

Lovvveeee

By all means...............................

Jackson needs to stop hemmin' and hawin' and bust a move ......'nuf said!!!!!

Saw a story by Bizzy_Bish...

...and I voted a 5.

Then I read the story.

Now I wish I could vote a 5, again.

Jackson Jackson

Wow he just earned major points in my book.