All Comments on 'Corrine'

Awful

... publish any more stories please

actually been with a woman, have you?

Even for a 19yo, cumming three times in such a short time is a bit much. Packing so much action into such a short space is also a bit of a stretch and to top it off with a relatively straight mum doing an ATM on the first date a bit over the top.

The intent was good but the delivery was poor.

I think your material was quite good, even if a little rushed. If you get the time you may want to try and space things out a little more. Trust visiting someone in prison takes a while so your characters have enough time to work up to things.

Overall a good story.

For all you fucks that won't leave your name and sign it anonymous SUCK.....

ill leave my name and also say please dont write another