Dear Susan, your story is exciting and very well written. I'm on the edge of my sit waiting for the comming chapters. in the mean time I'll be reading the other stories you've posted.
Count me as a very eager reader of however many chapters this story takes. I love the realism and that the mother isn't a complete slut, just spreading her legs for her son because he has an 11 inch cock or something.
Get on with it. You know you are just toying with our minds. Don't drag this out until the readers, meaning myself, of course, stop waiting for something to happen between mother and son. I continue to give you five stars based on your writing skill and the story line, however.
Susan Parker, you are a teaser par-excellance.
Not sure whether it is both cock and pussy teasing, but it is teasing in a master class.
Thanks and cheers.
Tony
Keep this going
I read all four chapters immediately and feel the same now as it did in my previous comment. I love the approach and where this is going.
Excellent
Dear Susan, your story is exciting and very well written. I'm on the edge of my sit waiting for the comming chapters. in the mean time I'll be reading the other stories you've posted.
Loving it
Count me as a very eager reader of however many chapters this story takes. I love the realism and that the mother isn't a complete slut, just spreading her legs for her son because he has an 11 inch cock or something.
Come on, Susan . . .
Get on with it. You know you are just toying with our minds. Don't drag this out until the readers, meaning myself, of course, stop waiting for something to happen between mother and son. I continue to give you five stars based on your writing skill and the story line, however.
wan't this supposed to be a four parter ?
just read part four and seriously its taken three chapters to get to where you finished chapter one
please start writing what you started in chapter one and the title Mom Strips Naked for Nude Day
Drawing in ...
I keep reading ... can't stop ... knowing where it is leading makes it no less provocative.
Tantalising
Susan Parker, you are a teaser par-excellance.
Not sure whether it is both cock and pussy teasing, but it is teasing in a master class.
Thanks and cheers.
Tony
Your love of slow sensuous seduction shows in your writing. Thank you and please continue to write.
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