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good storyline
Pretty good story but you need an editor to get it right. I am assuming you do not speak English as a first language which would explain some of the errors. Just use an editor and flesh out your stories more, give them more detail.
Your grammar sucks, but not a bad story.
Beautiful!
Beautiful story. Keep writing!
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