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Falling For The Teacher

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by dliter07/12/12

good storyline

Pretty good story but you need an editor to get it right. I am assuming you do not speak English as a first language which would explain some of the errors. Just use an editor and flesh out your stories more, give them more detail.

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by Anonymous07/12/12

Your grammar sucks, but not a bad story.

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by Anonymous07/13/12

Beautiful!

Beautiful story. Keep writing!

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