Mom Strips Naked for Nude Day Ch. 05

THIS IS # 5 PS TAKE A FEW DAYS AND WRITE A CHAPTER TAT GOES SOMEWHERE. grr caps lock.

lost interest

I'm going to find a story with some sex in it. That's what I look for on this site. I thought you had some potential, I guess I was wrong. Sorry.

max052

I pity the other comments

God forbid a story teases a bit and has some build up. There are plenty of wham bam thankyou mam stories on here. I personally appreciate a build up *gasp* character development and interesting backstory *gasp*

Keep up the good work Susan.

Sex? You want sex? You can't handle sex (lol).

All of you men waiting for sex in my story, Mom Strips Naked for Nude Day, perhaps you should wait, until I post all the chapters. Then, you can just go to those chapters with sex in them and masturbate over that.

I don't write masturbation stories. Sorry. There are plenty of authors on this site, who do. I write erotica, what this is all about, erotic stories.

Now, what kind of crappy story would it be, if when Jason arrived home his mother was in his bedroom fingering herself, while waiting for him to arrive? Would that be realistic? What kind of woman would she be? A slut? A whore? A deranged lunatic? No doubt, your kind of woman.

It takes time for Jason to turn his mother around into stripping off her clothes. A woman of God and of morals, she needs a reason to show her naked body to her son. She needs time, before she has sex with her son. Give the story some time and, trust me, the sex will come and the sex is worth the wait.

Moreover, Elizabeth is a real character, a real person, feel her and desire her, so that, when she finally strips naked, and she will, then you can see her, almost touch her, as I have in creatiing her. Sex, sex, sex, unfortunately, much in life, as it is in this story, is not about sex. Beliee it or not, not everything is about sex. Yes, sorry to burst your bubble, but the Honeymoon is over. Yet, the glimmer at the end of the tunnel is not sex, it's erotica.

Move your hand away from your cock and close your eyes. When you open them again, instead of bashing one of the best stories on the site, written by one of the greatest, and modest, writers on the site, you'll more appreciate my story.

Thank you for reading my story. I'd be insulted, if you only read the sexy bits. I wouldn't have done my job as a writer, if all you wanted to read of my work was the sex. Anyone can write a sex scene. Yes, even you. No one has to develop a character or create a fantasy to do that.

I know what to do. I'll tell you what. Go find a stupid, crappy, little story that has no character development, no descriptions, no imagery, no interior monologue, no dialogue, no tension, no beginning, middle, and ending, but one that has lots and lots of sex. Yeah, talking heads having sex. After you masturbated over that worthless read, come back and read a real story, my story.

I forgive you for being the perverted asshole that you are, but you can't help yourself.

Have a nice day and thanks for bashing, sorry, I mean, of course, reading my story.

Erotica versus Pornography

Just as there are two types of stories on this site, there are two kinds of writers on this site, pornographic and erotic.

Much as I don't enjoy porn films, I don't write pornography. I write erotica. There's a big difference.

Those who enjoy my stories are those who prefer reading a story that has a slow burn. They prefer reading a complete story, instead of just reading a sex scene. They need that to stimulate their imaginations by reading my storis. Instead of using erotica to masturbate themselves, instead, they use erotica to stimulate their sexual partner, as much as they have been stimulated by my stories.

If your intent is to masturbate, while alone in your room, then my stories are not for you. If your intent is to imagine your there in the room with my characters, then chances are good that you'll enjoy my stories.

Now that I've more defined the two, for those looking to read pornographic, I hope you will look elsewhere.

Thanks for reading and don't forget to vote.

Damn Ingrates!

Sic um Susan!

wow

someone sure has a thin skin.

greatest and modest?

" written by one of the greatest, and modest,"

I don't know what's more hilarious, your poor grammar, or utter lack of understanding of the definition of either of those words.

Ok....

One of the best? thats a tad arrogant dont you think also your story Repeats itself in the chapters O son how could you o mom just understand its not about sex O i dont care blah blah blah blah blah

You got it!

You summed me up perfectly. I love to read erotica like yours and I don't like or usually even read flat out pornography. I am looking forward to the rest of this erotic and maybe romantic story. Don't change please.

Take your time to expand the story.

I read all sorts of stories on here. I usually skip over the ones that get right to the sex. Often they are poorly writen, full of spelling and grammar mistakes that make reading the story difficult or nearly impossible to concentrate on. They are often inconsistant with name changes, charactor changes and even the tense that they have been writen in. My only comment that I would offer to you is perhaps you would simply submit the chapters as much larger ones, combining 2 or more chapters as one. I know that some readers might find it hard to concentrate on reading something with more than one page, but I think it would work.
Other than that, continue to paint a picture of these two. Taking the time to develope the charactors and explain their motivations, etc. I will read all the chapters as long as you post them.
Some people want to comment on stories without the need to register and want to submit comments as anonymous. We aren't scared or embarassed. We just don't want the hassle of registering.

Keep Going!!!

Great series Susan. I look forward to the next chapter.

To hell with the naysayers....

....just keep up the great work, Susan. I am more intrigued with every chapter. The hint that Jason could possibly be born of incest between his mother and grandfather is tantalizing to say the least.

How many times????

In this chapter, her mom gave her permission to call her Elizabeth, yet, more than a dozen times, he keeps refering to her as "mom". The idea of calling her other than mom is suppose to trigger to him that she's just a woman, not his mom, and willing to talk about sex. Geese, a wall has to fall on his head.

Now that was out of the blue.

I honestly didn't even suspect an incestuous relationship could have occurred already

Priceless!

'Written by one of the greatest, AND modest....', like I said, priceless lol!