Ms Parker you are seducing your audience. Talk about teasing the reader to always want more. Your writing is just alluring enough to make the reader want more; excellent job and far superior to those stories that go on for pages and pages. You do the same thing but spread over days and perhpas weeks to build the anticipation of your next installment ... can't wait to see where your mind takes us next.
great story and although not alot of actual sex the sexual innuendo's and descriptive writing has got me and cant wait for the next installments of this story
Intriguing to say the least...each installment entices and teases your many readers, wondering if and when they will culminate their desires!! Please continue....
You know, Susan.. I can't help imagining you in the role of the mother in this story. I realize that seems a very easy gap to bridge, considering your mind imagines the words you write, but within the context of this story, my mind is drawn to you in the role of the mother or even perhaps the son, since he is the hypothetical author. I wonder what feelings of lust you must feel while writing this.
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Capturing the Reader
Ms Parker you are seducing your audience. Talk about teasing the reader to always want more. Your writing is just alluring enough to make the reader want more; excellent job and far superior to those stories that go on for pages and pages. You do the same thing but spread over days and perhpas weeks to build the anticipation of your next installment ... can't wait to see where your mind takes us next.
You have me on the hook...
and i'm loving every minute.
great build up
great story and although not alot of actual sex the sexual innuendo's and descriptive writing has got me and cant wait for the next installments of this story
This Is True Erotica
Intriguing to say the least...each installment entices and teases your many readers, wondering if and when they will culminate their desires!! Please continue....
Self reflection
You know, Susan.. I can't help imagining you in the role of the mother in this story. I realize that seems a very easy gap to bridge, considering your mind imagines the words you write, but within the context of this story, my mind is drawn to you in the role of the mother or even perhaps the son, since he is the hypothetical author. I wonder what feelings of lust you must feel while writing this.
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