Ms Parker you are seducing your audience. Talk about teasing the reader to always want more. Your writing is just alluring enough to make the reader want more; excellent job and far superior to those stories that go on for pages and pages. You do the same thing but spread over days and perhpas weeks to build the anticipation of your next installment ... can't wait to see where your mind takes us next.
and i'm loving every minute.
great story and although not alot of actual sex the sexual innuendo's and descriptive writing has got me and cant wait for the next installments of this story
Intriguing to say the least...each installment entices and teases your many readers, wondering if and when they will culminate their desires!! Please continue....
You know, Susan.. I can't help imagining you in the role of the mother in this story. I realize that seems a very easy gap to bridge, considering your mind imagines the words you write, but within the context of this story, my mind is drawn to you in the role of the mother or even perhaps the son, since he is the hypothetical author. I wonder what feelings of lust you must feel while writing this.
Interesting how Elizabeth is now teasing Jason but yet when confronted with Jason seeing his mother nude Elizabeth uses the excuse of being his mother that it is not possible; this after Elizabeth was the one that told Jason to think of the two of them as a man and woman rather than mother and son.
Hard to believe there has been 8 chapters with Elizabeth and Jason still in his room talking... Yet, the curiosity and need to continue on to the next chapter is even stronger than progressing from Ch. 01 to Ch. 02.
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