All Comments on 'More Than An Office Romance'

Great story. I really loved it. However don't rely on spellcheck. Many words are correctly spelled but incorrectly used.. example, first sentence you use wondering when it should be wandering. I really look forward to much more from you. Thanks for your beautiful effort.

Sacrilege!

I really liked this, however like another said, don't rely on spell check, find an editor to help you with grammar, punctuation and the use of words.

appriciate the comments guys!

this was my first attempt at writing; im currently in contact with an editor after viewing your comments.

and i'll be sure to change my wine storage from now on :P

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Great job! I am so wet now!