The Monster Within

Why write this ?

The first story stood on it's own, the reader probably doesn't give a shit why the psychologist friend was so evil and manipulative. Our own understanding of the human mind is still in it's infancy compared to other sciences. It always seems that any attempt by someone who committs a sex crime or a hate crime ends up to be self serving and lends little new information or insight.

and the point to this is what?

Please!!

Write a damn story and stop wasting your talent. What you have written is fine and dandy but this psych theme wears thin quickly here on this site. So write a story please!!!!!!!

Five Stars

I give five stars to the ravings of a lunatic. Being one myself, I understand.

Mama Mama we're all crazee now

HA

Wrong category

If it were titled, "It Started With That Talk, Ch 02," maybe it could squeeze into LW. But this story is separately titled and totally lacks eroticism, so Non-Erotic would be more appropriate. The editing was better than this author's last story, but still needs some work. Run-on sentences seem to be the norm in this writing style.

Also, the part where the prison psychologist recommends two books to the jailed rapist-psychologist just does not pass the smell test. She would have read up on the bio of her patient before beginning the session, and she would have known that he authored those books. A more effective way to say the same thing might have been, "You wrote the following two books about getting in touch with your inner self. Do you no longer believe what you wrote?"

This author has some original ideas and a good vocabulary. A more realistic delivery would greatly improve the ratings, IMO. Only three stars for this one.

this guy needs to meet

Ell and her husband with no name in "I kill monsters" he is a monster and needs their special attention.

I stopped reading at him saying he blames his mother, what a heap of shit, you didn't need to write this, he raped her because he could and he wanted to plain and simple.

I Think

A third chapter is needed where the Antagonist gets out of Jail. and either the wife,(helen) , Lover(susan),, Friend(bill) or Daughter(sandie-sue) take him for a ride he never returns from.

Well OK -

That is an interesting explanation of his behavior and even a plausible one -

I do not see the BTB folks being so vocal about this one though ?????/ How is he blameless and she is bad??

The plungers in the three syringes emptied their justice into Stevens veins

Applause rung throughout the witness gallery. Smiles abounded as they exited the room with high fives and back slaps between all.
Just 2 cents from us BTB crowd.
Dudes, Rape is Rape even if she walk naked down the street! Rape is Rape and No means No. No fault here on Sue's part

you know...

as much as i hate capital punishment, people like that make me rethink my stand.

Clever bugger arnt I

Steve's a nut case. Wonder if he gets out in eight years, or stays on the psych ward.
Interesting pair of stories. I'm on an iPad, so one finger typing. Awfully dark story though.

Good job mr black

Nice try.

First story was WAY over the top. Now we find out that it's because the bad guy was crazy? I appreciate the effort, but this story still requires a suspension of disbelief greater than my imagination is capable of.

SELF DEGRADATION

is the worst kind of punishment. TK U MLJ LV NV

RIGHT NOW WE CAN ALL ADHERE TO THE OLD MED-ADAGE

Physician Heal Thyself. TK U MLJ LV NV

I dont care about mental health issues..

We are all somehow in one way or another fucked up by our upbringing.
Why is that only some turn to criminal acts and end up doing horrible things..
Such evil sickos should be punished ever more severly. They shouldnt be treated and then let go to enjoy their own lives, after having destroyed the lives of others..

Yuk..

Seriously....

No idea why this crap was wrote.

Better, talk of how hopefully he was raped every day and needed stitches in his ass.

And then he did the world a favour and hung himself