All Comments on 'My Red Headed Friend Ch. 03'

... poor spelling, grammar and punctuation!

Get yourself a Proof Reader since you can't, or won't, do it yourself!!

This is not a chapter,it is a short page,less than 2 minutes to read,,,i do enjoy your writing,but it really needs to be longer to keep the interest,,,Your writing is excellent,just short,,,,and please keep posting,i would like to read more of this one..