Thanks for the read, very hot. Hopefully you'll make it a little longer (not to long) sometimes a quick jack-off story is all you need. Please keep writing, and forget the "anonymous" gutless cowards who probably couldn't write a paragraph, never mind a story. People have to remember your not writing war and peace here. These are just jack-off stories. This was a good one.
i love a short story, you should get someone to edit your work as it looks like english is not your main language.... don't worry about the wanker hes not even game to put his name on his comments
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Anonymous07/28/12
Well?
This could have been a good story. After saying that, someone should tell mikrik, GET SOME HELP WITH THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE...
It didn't take long to realize that English isn't the first language of mikrik. I had to re-read the part where his swim wear was described; "I had a couple of swim trouser on". Kind of funny thinking he was wearing two pair of swim trunks. After that I just skimmed the story to get through it, hoping it would get better, but it didn't and the grammar and spelling didn't either. Thankfully it wasn't a long story. The part of the story where they are in the water and he asks his Mom if his dick is in her or is she playing tricks on him got another laugh.
If you intend to write and submit any more stories, please have one of the English speaking Literotica authors proof read it first.
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Anonymous07/28/12
Good story
Keep writing, good story, maybe a followup, just have your story edited first
Would like to read more of their relationship after they started fucking, and I would hope that they had sex more than once a day.
Did mom become pregnant with her son's child and perhaps more than just one pregnancy spanning several decades until mom was too old to become pregnant.
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Anonymous07/28/12
learn the english language.
The english is very bad and storyline is not good.
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Anonymous07/29/12
I think maybe he is still dreaming,,,
I have actually fucked my Mother,,,and I found, also w/other guys that have truly fucked their Mothers, that there is really little or no talk happening,,,,,I had played w/my Moms pussy and tits many times over a couple years, always thinking she was asleep, but then one night she came to MY room, w/only a teddi top on, and we did the usual that i would do to her, but then, after fingering her, I decided to go further,,,I had lost my virginity only 2 weeks prior, and I think she knew this, OR, she figured I was close, and she wanted to be my 1st, so i went down and ate her pussy, and I think the fact that I did that, made her my slave for that one night, it was so many years ago, and I always wish i could have that night back, I would have made her my slut, and done so much more,,,,,,I am positive that when she came to my room that nite, she figured it would just be me playing w/her pussy again.After eating her, which I know she had NO plans of happening, she was almost squirting, so very, very wet, I slid up in the bed behind her, as she was on her side, and I gently entered her pussy from behind,,,,she was motionless for about 15 minutes of my slow pumping into her,the ony sounds besides her wet pussy sloshing were a few deep gutteral moans and gasps, I was very large even then, over 9", but then she started to move back against me vigorously, and we fucked for well over an hour this way,,,,,when I started to cum, she squeezed every muscle in her hairy pussy around my cock, I think I know now that she was also cumming,,,,I pumped so much cum into her, that after she left my bed, I had a huge puddle of my cum on the sheets, I could hear her in the bathroom draining my cum from her pussy, to this day, it is the longest most intense orgasm I have ever had,,we never discussed it, and that was the last time we did anything such as that,,there was once an instance about six months later, when I was alone w/my Mom and an aunt, and we were all drunk, I had been fucking the aunt, and the 3 of us were almost into the bedroom, but then someone showed up at my aunts house, and we had to stop, that would have been heaven, and to this day i regret not making that happen,,,,,my Mom is now 80 years old, and the aunt is 66, and I am 52,,,to this day, i still jerk off thinking about my Mother, and sometimes my aunt, almost dauly,,,even tho I have an active sex life w/several gorgeous women, I still get off on that Mother fuck, Fucking your Mother is beautiful, and I would never regret it, she did me a favor, by teaching me to be tender,,,,,,,,sorry this got so long,,,,LOL ALL fact from here! I think if the opportunity AROSE, i WOULD FUCK BOTH OF THEM TODAY ALSO! :-)
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Anonymous07/29/12
I liked it!!!
Great story......reminds me of years ago with my mother. Some of the best memories ever!!
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Anonymous07/31/12
Poor English
The storyline is OK but a little too rushed. Needs more detail. But I couldn't get past the poor English. Keep writing, but maybe have someone proof it and correct the grammar.
Bad English, and I'm not talking about the band. I have an idea. What if we don't vote for stories that bar public comment? If you write a story for the public, allow the public to speak openly.
English
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WTF is this retarded garbage?
very badly written. awful story.
Terrible story
Worst story ever, never deserve to be on literotica site.
Awful
Terrible grammar and spelling and the story line is too simple. Was it written by a 12 year old?
Well done
Thanks for the read, very hot. Hopefully you'll make it a little longer (not to long) sometimes a quick jack-off story is all you need. Please keep writing, and forget the "anonymous" gutless cowards who probably couldn't write a paragraph, never mind a story. People have to remember your not writing war and peace here. These are just jack-off stories. This was a good one.
great story
i love a short story, you should get someone to edit your work as it looks like english is not your main language.... don't worry about the wanker hes not even game to put his name on his comments
Well?
This could have been a good story. After saying that, someone should tell mikrik, GET SOME HELP WITH THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE...
A part two?
It didn't take long to realize that English isn't the first language of mikrik. I had to re-read the part where his swim wear was described; "I had a couple of swim trouser on". Kind of funny thinking he was wearing two pair of swim trunks. After that I just skimmed the story to get through it, hoping it would get better, but it didn't and the grammar and spelling didn't either. Thankfully it wasn't a long story. The part of the story where they are in the water and he asks his Mom if his dick is in her or is she playing tricks on him got another laugh.
If you intend to write and submit any more stories, please have one of the English speaking Literotica authors proof read it first.
Good story
Keep writing, good story, maybe a followup, just have your story edited first
You might be a good author in your native language, but in English, you're ...not.
Too confusing, and too much time and mental energy wasted to attempt to decipher this attempt at a story. Seriously.
good story
sounds like a true mom and son, be nice to know how many mom and son really havee some sex,it is so hot and natural, hope to read more
Wow
That really turned me on, wow! Nice!
A good start
Would like to read more of their relationship after they started fucking, and I would hope that they had sex more than once a day.
Did mom become pregnant with her son's child and perhaps more than just one pregnancy spanning several decades until mom was too old to become pregnant.
learn the english language.
The english is very bad and storyline is not good.
I think maybe he is still dreaming,,,
I have actually fucked my Mother,,,and I found, also w/other guys that have truly fucked their Mothers, that there is really little or no talk happening,,,,,I had played w/my Moms pussy and tits many times over a couple years, always thinking she was asleep, but then one night she came to MY room, w/only a teddi top on, and we did the usual that i would do to her, but then, after fingering her, I decided to go further,,,I had lost my virginity only 2 weeks prior, and I think she knew this, OR, she figured I was close, and she wanted to be my 1st, so i went down and ate her pussy, and I think the fact that I did that, made her my slave for that one night, it was so many years ago, and I always wish i could have that night back, I would have made her my slut, and done so much more,,,,,,I am positive that when she came to my room that nite, she figured it would just be me playing w/her pussy again.After eating her, which I know she had NO plans of happening, she was almost squirting, so very, very wet, I slid up in the bed behind her, as she was on her side, and I gently entered her pussy from behind,,,,she was motionless for about 15 minutes of my slow pumping into her,the ony sounds besides her wet pussy sloshing were a few deep gutteral moans and gasps, I was very large even then, over 9", but then she started to move back against me vigorously, and we fucked for well over an hour this way,,,,,when I started to cum, she squeezed every muscle in her hairy pussy around my cock, I think I know now that she was also cumming,,,,I pumped so much cum into her, that after she left my bed, I had a huge puddle of my cum on the sheets, I could hear her in the bathroom draining my cum from her pussy, to this day, it is the longest most intense orgasm I have ever had,,we never discussed it, and that was the last time we did anything such as that,,there was once an instance about six months later, when I was alone w/my Mom and an aunt, and we were all drunk, I had been fucking the aunt, and the 3 of us were almost into the bedroom, but then someone showed up at my aunts house, and we had to stop, that would have been heaven, and to this day i regret not making that happen,,,,,my Mom is now 80 years old, and the aunt is 66, and I am 52,,,to this day, i still jerk off thinking about my Mother, and sometimes my aunt, almost dauly,,,even tho I have an active sex life w/several gorgeous women, I still get off on that Mother fuck, Fucking your Mother is beautiful, and I would never regret it, she did me a favor, by teaching me to be tender,,,,,,,,sorry this got so long,,,,LOL ALL fact from here! I think if the opportunity AROSE, i WOULD FUCK BOTH OF THEM TODAY ALSO! :-)
I liked it!!!
Great story......reminds me of years ago with my mother. Some of the best memories ever!!
Poor English
The storyline is OK but a little too rushed. Needs more detail. But I couldn't get past the poor English. Keep writing, but maybe have someone proof it and correct the grammar.
FAT SPERM?!?!?
LOLWTF...
I agree
Bad English, and I'm not talking about the band. I have an idea. What if we don't vote for stories that bar public comment? If you write a story for the public, allow the public to speak openly.
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