by musicfreak
I would love for it all to be up now. I submitted all of the chaps in a day. Literotica has put a date for each chap and they go up 1 a day. I guess to regulate the traffic. But yeah they next chap will be up tomorrow and the following after etc. Glad you liked the story.
there such a great couple.... and hope they express there fillings soon... can't wait to read the next one...
Don't be sorry... the way there posted gives us some thing to look for tomorrow and it makes it more exacting... LOVE IT
I have no complaints so far. This is such a sweet story made all the better by it feeling so real.
Hi, i LOVE the story so far, i was just wondering how many chapters there are?
Love it!!!
And am very happy that Coreys mom turned around. Wish my dad would do the same to my brother.. (Mom´s allright!)
Is this your own story or a mix of truth and fantasy?
Can´t wait for tomorrows chapter")
Have just told my bro about this story and he is just as hooked as I am.. He sees a lot of himself in it. Thanks!!
There is a total of 9 chaps of this story so 3 more chaps to go. As for the inspiration of this story. It is very inspired my my first real crush in school. But I didn't have the nerve to talk to him so I guess it's my fantasy. Lol.
Only 3 more chapters? I'm a little sad, but I love this story. I hope we get to read more of your work in the future.
So far, so good. I'm glad the Mom came around but, then again, I thought she would. Curious to see what happens next.
Your story is awesome, but are you going to make the last three chapters longer, or will they be shorter?
Well I'll try to get another story up in the next month but no promises. Really busy at the moment. For the next 2 years I don't have much time to sit and write so if i don't put one up in the next month it won't be for another few years. I know it's a VERY long time but i have certain commitments that i can't get out of. As for the length of the remaining chaps they are roughly the same as my other chaps already up. Thanks for reading guys.
I hope your next three chapters will inspire u to write a novel
I really love what you are writing
lovely imagination ---- let the dream last a few decades!!!!!!!
I love your story, though I still haven't figure out where you're going with it. But nonetheless, I'm enjoying it so much!
That was a great chapter and I am pleased his Mum apologised This is a lovely story