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This is in mind control because there's MORE to the story than what's been posted. Just because this doesn't have MC right now, doesn't mean it won't later! Please read this before posting another comment bitching about there's no MC in this. All right? Great.
ok :-)
Great, I am looking forward to it :-)
Please, do warn use next time at the beginning of the story. There won't be any bitching then. Thanks ;)
Proof read it first
This was spoilt for me because, from the beginning, the English is so appalling. A simple proof read would soon have made this a better read. I am sorry but I was unable to follow the plot to the end without simply giving up and offering you my reasons for doing so.
After all, it was their dirty little secret.
and a very erotic and physical secret....well written and had the effect you were after....
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