All Comments on 'Waiting For You'

It is really HOT how much you're looking forward to sex! Maybe we could put our heads together :) to create the next part of your story? PM me if interested!

It really is much better than the score indicates.

Author I suspect the low score reflects the fact the story is relatively short and to me felt hurried. I think if you sat down and took a little more time you could have stretched it out further and still kept the heat and it was a hot story.

If you go to the boards on Lit. There are several boards where you can got very good ideas from other authors.

Despite what I have said I still gave you five stars and I'm off to rd Pt. 2

Mike