All Comments on 'Mommy On My Lap'

by MicheleNylons

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great start.

A great start.... looking forward to the next one.

funtungnfrogfuntungnfrogover 11 years ago
Fun Ride

Going to be interesting to see what the evening brings.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Ride home...

Can't wait for the ride home when mom starts up this time...

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nice short story

A lot of real and familiar actions. Many guys jo the same way.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
A fairly good story

You do have the talent for making the story interesting. I have to admit that this storyline has been done a numer of times. Full car. Mom sits on Son's lap. Son gets erection. At least you didn't have him fuck his Mom. A nice dry hump is a refreshing and much more realistic change. Usually Mom gets nine inches of man meat up her cunt caused by a malfunctioning thong and an inadvertan bounce of the car. Which is a little unrealistic. In these stories thongs break as often as people get amnesia on television. I do look forward to seeing what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
to all negative commentors

seriously? you are going to sit here and complain that this story line has been told and told over and over again? please tell me what story line hasn't been used over and over..at least this writer was able to make it sound interesting.

Ian SinclairIan Sinclairover 11 years ago
Great story, very well told...

The comments that the plotline has been used before is a red herring - (plotlines are re-used all the time. The plot of girl meets boy, girl loses boy, girls find boy again has been used numerous times by Hollywood, and I'm sure theyll' never stop making RomComs!!)

It was very well told, lots of realism, good dialogue, and excellent imagery. It does badly need a sequel. I was disappointed to see it end after page 2, so go on mate, what you waiting for - get writing :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Loved it!

Love EVERYTHING about it! Love anything pantyhose!

SpankingMyMomSpankingMyMomover 11 years ago
Anxious

This was very good. I am anxious for the next installment. Your stories are always good. Keep it up.

Mature_nylonsMature_nylonsover 11 years ago
Bravo Michelle

As sexy as any of your stories sweetheart. very HOT

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
O.o

I like this story o.o

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Wonderful Cumming

What an erotic piece of literature which should be encouraged.

cumming on a sons moms bum should also be encouraged.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
5* - MY CUP OF TEA

I was obsessed with my mother's ass!

My mome was in many of my jck-off fantasies.

I also am an ass man AND a leg man & hoisery turns me on!

shang40shang40almost 9 years ago

ममाचे कुल्ले

लई भारी

व ती मांडीत बसलि तर

होतो लंड ताठ

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Oh Such Naughtiness

I love your writings Michele and this is no different , brilliant and so descriptive , cant wait for chapter 2 . xx

cindylynn34cindylynn34over 5 years ago

Erotica at its best. Loved it a lot.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a10 months ago

Okay story. Appreciate the author's effort.

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