Dear Ms Parker,
Your writing style, the short episodes, the descriptions of thought process, the anticipation of what is to come, all manage to make me hard, soft, hard again. I don't know when or who is going to cum first! Well done, keep it - and me - up!
I continue to give you five stars, although, I would give you ten or even more if possible, for your story. Your writing style and this approach to extending your reader's interest over a series of short chapters, teasing your readers, drawing us into wanting, albeit impatiently at times, for the promised climax has caught the imagination and appeal to all of your devoted readers. If this story doesn't rank among the highest submitted for the Nude Day Contest, there is no justice among the judges. Kudos to you and the Literotica site!
I must say, this story is reminiscent of Scherizade and her 1000 tales. keeping the reader waiting impatiently for the next part to arrive. I must say, i look forward to each part with so little patience, i find myself checking constantly to see if it is out yet.
I think it's time for a looong story. I enjoy the build up, as many authors here suck at it, but there's a point when it's just too slow. Much like a relationship, there's the "slow move" and the "sometime next decade Please, Please make a move".
Contemplating what might happen next as this moment goes forward to all the sex you can imagine. Relaxed nudity on a daily basis with a perpetual erection may preceed the event in brilliant bright light.
I'm loving the long slow build up. it's like really great sex. I almost fear the climax as it will mean the end is near. Please keep up the great work.
Love how this is going on.
I do believe Dear Susan, you'd be relishing this as the perfect seduction.
Congratulations at having so many of us panting and ready to do your will.
;-))
TonyO (NZ)
What a story!
Dear Ms Parker,
Your writing style, the short episodes, the descriptions of thought process, the anticipation of what is to come, all manage to make me hard, soft, hard again. I don't know when or who is going to cum first! Well done, keep it - and me - up!
SusanJillParker . . .
I continue to give you five stars, although, I would give you ten or even more if possible, for your story. Your writing style and this approach to extending your reader's interest over a series of short chapters, teasing your readers, drawing us into wanting, albeit impatiently at times, for the promised climax has caught the imagination and appeal to all of your devoted readers. If this story doesn't rank among the highest submitted for the Nude Day Contest, there is no justice among the judges. Kudos to you and the Literotica site!
Incredible
I must say, this story is reminiscent of Scherizade and her 1000 tales. keeping the reader waiting impatiently for the next part to arrive. I must say, i look forward to each part with so little patience, i find myself checking constantly to see if it is out yet.
Mom Strips Naked
Enjoying the story so far, good build up, not a quick story with no substance to it. Keep going, I'm waiting for the next part.
I think it's time for a looong story. I enjoy the build up, as many authors here suck at it, but there's a point when it's just too slow. Much like a relationship, there's the "slow move" and the "sometime next decade Please, Please make a move".
Enjoying
Contemplating what might happen next as this moment goes forward to all the sex you can imagine. Relaxed nudity on a daily basis with a perpetual erection may preceed the event in brilliant bright light.
You're dragging this on way way too long.
Here is my favorite story on here by far.
http://www.literotica.com/s/for-mom-the-son-a lso-rises
Loving it.
I'm loving the long slow build up. it's like really great sex. I almost fear the climax as it will mean the end is near. Please keep up the great work.
Love the slow tease!
Loving this story, the slow tease has me coming back every day looking for the next update. Thanks so much!
Awesome
VERY AROUSING
Long, slow, tantalising
Love how this is going on.
I do believe Dear Susan, you'd be relishing this as the perfect seduction.
Congratulations at having so many of us panting and ready to do your will.
;-))
TonyO (NZ)
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