by montco724
It takes an expat to explain to us the slutty side of Indian Women and the wimpiness of Indian Men.All the while Indian writers have been in self denial over their fetish"cuckoldry"
The last commenter is an idiot. Anyone who makes such sweeping generalizations is in fantasy land. That aside, good story for the most part. It would be better to put more details into the sex scenes. Sounds, teeth, lips, tongue, wet, That stuff. how was the girl dressed? Hair up or down? details so we can imagine it.
Good story
well done - well written and nothing but a realistic view of what might happen. nothing too bizzare. dont worry about the hate filled comments.
Lying down not laying down
Gotton laid.
These lndicate an american author for americans cannot get their verbs right.