For sharing your gift with me. You write well, as good as any on this site, and your characters are real people. Well done. I have added you to my favorites and will read all of your stories.
EACH GENERATIONS OF "HILL-BILLYS" HAVE THEIR OWN FETISH
for some it was Bluberrys, for some Walnuts, for some Mushrooms after the rain, for some it was Pick out Cigaretteres or Cars. Bottom line=the same, TK U MLJ LV NV
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Anonymous06/16/13
Instead of adding new stories, FINISH stories like this, I wasted my time reading a story that you haven't added to in 5 years and now this? Come on!
...are not meant to be finished. That is the point of my one-pagers. They are based on songs which are themselves "unfinished". Contrary to what you may imagine, I DO plan the "Shorts" -- that's why I call them "Shorts". Perhaps at some point in the future, I will finish one or more of them, but at the moment, I have no such plans.
As to the rest, I'm sorry you felt reading the unfinished work you read was a waste of time. It would have been nice, though, if you had chosen to step from behind the cover of anonymity to say this to me in person, so perhaps we could have had an actual conversation about the problem. Sadly, you prefer to throw barbs from behind a curtain, and neither of us is helped by it. Assuming, of course, that what you're after is to help me be a better writer...
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Very nice - another chapter or two would give you a chance to flesh out some of the details of their lives that are only hinted at.
My sweet wildwood flower...
Worth waiting for!
Thank You
For sharing your gift with me. You write well, as good as any on this site, and your characters are real people. Well done. I have added you to my favorites and will read all of your stories.
EACH GENERATIONS OF "HILL-BILLYS" HAVE THEIR OWN FETISH
for some it was Bluberrys, for some Walnuts, for some Mushrooms after the rain, for some it was Pick out Cigaretteres or Cars. Bottom line=the same, TK U MLJ LV NV
Instead of adding new stories, FINISH stories like this, I wasted my time reading a story that you haven't added to in 5 years and now this? Come on!
Stories like this...
...are not meant to be finished. That is the point of my one-pagers. They are based on songs which are themselves "unfinished". Contrary to what you may imagine, I DO plan the "Shorts" -- that's why I call them "Shorts". Perhaps at some point in the future, I will finish one or more of them, but at the moment, I have no such plans.
As to the rest, I'm sorry you felt reading the unfinished work you read was a waste of time. It would have been nice, though, if you had chosen to step from behind the cover of anonymity to say this to me in person, so perhaps we could have had an actual conversation about the problem. Sadly, you prefer to throw barbs from behind a curtain, and neither of us is helped by it. Assuming, of course, that what you're after is to help me be a better writer...
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