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Wow!!!
Well, Bucky, that might be pure fiction, but you're describing something close to the relationship I had with my third wife, except that she was on board the entire way.
Great piece of writing...scalding hot.
You're sick, twisted & perverted......
and I like that in a person!! };->.... What a story!
amazing story.....
i could not stop reading please right another chapter!!!
Oh the hotness
Clever, compelling, honest and oh so deliciously dirty. Thanks.
smoking!
Ridiculously HOTT. Thank you:-)
Hot, but not just hot
...that was a damn good piece of writing (and hot as hell).
A creampie lover's delight!
Delicious!
Enjoyed the writing - I really wanted to believe it was a true story
Wow, that was a great piece of writing. I was just looking for something to read while I JO, but I came after the first page. Usually I'd be done after that but I couldn't help but continue until I finished the story.
Fucking awesome
This is honestly a really good story and super hot and maybe you should workshop it and try to submit it to an erotica journal?
Excellent
Good story, good writing, good plan.
Wonderful
That was a wonderful read ... thanks for composing it
Thanks!
... for sharing this excellent story, which I found erotic, intimate, and insightful as to th e emotions of a loving "willing cuckold" situation like this.
Perfection
This story has so many things in common with my relationship with my husband. It turns me on and fills me with a warm happiness all at the same time. Thank you so much for writing this out- I will reread this one for ages.
Wow
That was not only very well written, it was hotter that hot! Another one of your stories into my favourites
Fantastic Story
This is a great story. Erotic and dirty and almost a how to for guys to get someone out of their league. Thanks!
Incredible
This is an incredibly well written story. The pace is so fast and it really really drags you in. I came so hard at the end, but a little bit of me didn't want the story to end.
this story was really hot, really filthy, and...cute, honestly. and it couldn't be as good if it weren't so romantic.excellent work.
WOW!
This is such a well written story! It drew me in and kept me wanting for more!! It parallels a lot of my own feelings. Now I must find more of your stories to read...
Hot!
This was one of the best written, hottest stories I have ever read. Incredible! Thanks for writing and sharing this story with us.
Incredible
this got me off like never before, the build up in the kitchen was so well-written, and the final sex scene tipped me over. Great job
Oh Man!
I love this story! Is there a part 2?
Brilliant
Totally not my thing, and yet so damned compelling!
Nice Fucking Writing.
Hot
Like what Pam and Jim were doing behind closed doors.
Great story
Loved the writing. You hit my fantasy spot on.
Enjoyment
I am so pleased with this story - it's unusual, it's delightful in its twists and turns. AND it's well organized well told and the characters are almost real .
Thank you
Although not one of my (many) kinks I agree with the other reviews. Extremely well done and made me horny as hell. Thank you.
Fantastically well written
Praise sound flat a lot of the time but, risking that, I need to say how well crafted this story is. The characters are so well fleshed out and the interplay between them so real it rivals the best on this site.
I just hope mine can improve to this level someday.
Thanks!
asianToy
PS the kink doesn't do it for me but that just shows how good the story is!!
This is a wonderful story. Even as deep in my wheelhouse as it is, and it is deep, deep in there, I could appreciate the writing over my own kink. It's spartan but fully-formed, lively and never slow, but also well described. Sexy and intimate but also raw and honest. Very well done, Bucky.
I love your style, Bucky.
I think it's the short, quirky sentences. This was squicky for me to read, but for all the fetishy sex, it was a fun, complete story with a satisfying ending.
Delightfully deliciuous tale,
Wishing I was your character in the story. Hoping for a sequel,,,, Does Monica do a group?,,,,She would be soooooooooooo delicious,,, my mouth is watering,,
My Second Read
Just as goôd as the first! You do kink really well'. Wish I could write dirty as well.
Guys: you need to do this. If your girl has any spunk at all (yes, I see the double entendre) then do this for her.
asianToy
another great one
I'm coming to really appreciate your excellent work. you are so good at showing the person behind the actions. I have not read all your work, please keep them coming so I still have more to discover.
You are a very good writer.
I greatly enjoy your writing. Sometimes I forget that I am supposed to be jerking off while reading what you have written, I am being drawn along with the characters and the story development; Then I come back to my senses and remember what brought me here in the first place. I hope to read your 'real' book someday.
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