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Bedding the Babysitter Ch. 06

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by Anonymous09/10/12

Be you

Amazing Story all together. The story should definitely not end here. The incest would be hot. But no matter what Ashley and Jenny need to live happily ever after dammit. Maybe Megan and the mom to, just a thought.

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by Anonymous09/10/12

Superb

If I was female I would have to be .a slut lesbian who enjoys exhibitionism insect would be so hot especially if it included a threesome with Ashley please don't stop

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by Anonymous09/12/12

PLEASE don's stop!

this has been an AMAZING story! and PLEASE don't stop.
I think Jenny and her mother should "Accidently" end up EATn and LICKn eachother all night.
than keep a secret love affair that lasts a long time to come!

I would also like to hear more about Jenny and Amy's relationship.

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by Littleprick09/14/12

You are a genius

Your story is really awesome.

I would love to see the prom night with Ashley and Jenny.

It would be hot to see Jenny and her mother but I think it would be too awkward. Jenny is clearly in love with Ashley who is not a dom so I think Jenny will only be a sub for Megan, Karen is Morgan from time to time. Unless Ashley becomes a dom or a sub to fit in Jenny's world but I don't think she will and let's face it Ashley will become more important than anything for Jenny so compromises will have to be made.
Seeing jenny and her mother both servicing Megan is a possibility because her mother will probably become Megan's slave and Jenny is too. I think seeing each other humiliated will be a turn on for them.

I vote:
-Jenny and her mother both Megan's slaves. And if you manage it, a little incestuous relationship between the two.
-Karen remains Jenny's mother mistress but she will not be Jenny's anymore (she has Sabrina and Jenny has Ashley)
-Ashley and Jenny become a proud gay couple and go to prom together.

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by Gemini176609/14/12

Fucking hot, wild, nasty, and I want more.

This has been a great story line. You could keep it going easily. And, frankly, I do wish you would, Silkie.

As for my ideas, from your list there are two chapters in that alone, at the very minimum.
For the next chapter I imagine ending the evening with all three of them talking and getting things straight between them all, then Jenny off to bed with a hint of mom and Mistress having a night of pleasure together, that can be the basis for another separate story line.. Follow that with the next day with Karen picking her up but teasing Jenny's mother before they go. A reminder of the punishment Jenny's going to get on the drive to school but leaving it hanging so that Jenny has to worry over it and only revealing it right before English class: make it involve playing with herself (edging) during class and making sure Teacher sees it, and a full blown orgasm when the bell rings. It is a punishment after all.

Following chapter would be prom and the other women going to the club. It would involve Ashley's introduction to Rosie with both girls pleasuring her together stripped down to stockings only with both mother and Megan there with them and go from there. Might be fun to visit the Gov and her daughter for a fine time, too. That could be the next chapter and the incest could occur there between both daughters and mothers as a lesbian orgy.

Yes, I have a very good imagination. Now, if I could only get my story started with that much to work with. LOL

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by Anonymous09/19/12

Dont stop

Your story hits right at home it is like you where writting the story of my life but for me it was a black cheerleader. It was high school I realized my submissive side and I came out as a lesbian. This story needs to continue.

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by Anonymous10/11/12

mother

turn the mother into a nasty slut. fist,anal,pain. Have the girls DP and use her. A dirty that get off doing the unthinkable s.

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by Anonymous10/13/12

Keep it going!!!

This is an amazing story! Although it has a great ending so far; it would be a shame to leave it as is. It would be great for something to happen at least with Megan once she walks in. But most definitely the punishment by Karen and the prom date should be continued please!!

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by LLoomis6210/19/12

Please, don't stop! lol

Your story is wonderful and you lots of great ideas to keep it going. Just keep writing what you feel like and I will keep reading.

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by emsla10/19/12

this is an AMAZING! story and would love for you to continue.

I would love to hear how Jenny n Ashley's Prom went and how there life as a Happy couple together.
I am also interested on how Jenny makes it out with Ms. Morgan.
and I would deffingately love to read if Jenny and her mom end up being family lovers!
maybe you can have them making dinner and.................
or on the couch watching tv or movie....................

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by Anonymous10/20/12

Bring back the Governor

Bring her back and describe the kinky and nasty things she did with her sub for the weekend..have Megan and Karen really use jenny's mom as a fuck toy..Maybe some more hardcore bondadge

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by Anonymous10/23/12

' DESTROY the idea of incest its disgusting i hate reading on Literotica please dont do it YUK
Jenny should go to the dance with Ashley and realise that she is the only for her. But still appreciating how they met through her 2 Mistresses ! Mrs Wyatt should get with Meg Like relationship wise she is to sad and lonely ! Miss Morgan can realise that she is in love with Jenny and has been for a long time because she wanted jenny long before her transformation. Giving a love triangle between Ashley Jenny and Miss Morgan aka Cameron :)
Karen hhhmmmmmm she can slowy become extremely jealous now because her Mistress Megan has taken her Sub Mrs Wyatt and dosent like to share ! Karen tries desperatley to Dominate over the 2 but finds herself shut down when they reach the La Chaleatu Club after the prom they all decide to go there and Senator Green takes a large liking towards Karen, and she becomes ah Mistress Karen will not dare to disobey like she did Meg !
and yeah ahah
but serriously silkstockinglover I LOVE YOUR WORK AND THE ABOVE IS WHAT I WOULD LIKE TO SEE HAPPEN but anything you write i love ! and love how you bring Literotica into your stories its trippy as !
But please keep but no incest PLEASE IM BEGGING MISTRESS SILKSTOCKINGSLOVER

E.K

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by maddies10/31/12

Keep it coming!

Love this story so descriptive and inventive. Be a shame to end it now. I think the dynamics are awesome and be interesting to see if there is a conflict for Jenny between her love of Ashley and her love or her submissive side. Think it would be great for her to interact with her mum, karen and megan. I would be really excited to see the return of Senetor Green and her daughter.

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by maxout0911/01/12

Stay focused on Karen, Jenny and Ashley

First off let me say I love your story. The character development is great and you have created a fantastic storyline and it would be a shame to let it end now.

As for advice do not get Jenny and her mother together. They are both subs and they did not seem keen on the idea in the last chapter. They only way for this to happen is if Meg or Karen made it happen and I cannot see Meg doing this.

My ideas….
Keep Jenny and Ashley is a loving relationship they can explore the emotional side of sexuality as they try and make it work with what is happening around them. However develop them more as two subs. This way you can use Karen to add drama. Jenny can be made to do things with other woman like have her continue her secret affair with Miss Morgan or made to seduce Ashley’s mom all at Karen’s direction to feed her submissive desires while trying to keep it away from her love Ashley.

You can also let Karen get her hooks into Ashley possibly having her do something for the cheer coach. I would also have Ashley reconsider making there relationship public as she is afraid of what her parents would say. This secretive aspect can then flow into other areas of the life. I think it would be great to read them both having some type of submissive adventure in the afternoon and getting together for a date unaware of what the other was doing. Or you can have Karen dominate both of them in her house at the same time without the other being aware and Karen gives each instructions no what they should do on there date later.

However you have two great stories entwined together; the evil relationship between Karen and Jenny and the loving one between Jenny and Ashley. Make it a fight to see which one wins out.

As for Jenny’s mom and Meg I would use them a little less. Make them explore a relationship with each other in the background as you made some very strong characters with Jenny, Ashley and Karen, they should be the focus. You could use Jenny’s mom as a pawn for Karen who uses her as her slave possibility having her get together with Miss Morgan, the cheer coach or Ashley’s mother maybe at the club.

Lastly keep the prom for later, evolve the relationships and use that for a main event.

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by Anonymous11/08/12

swerve

How about have Jenny have a mistress... would be nice to see how far she has learned from her three mistresses.

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by Anonymous11/20/12

one of the best stories I have read in a long time

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by Anonymous11/20/12

jenny and her mom need to know how each other tastes as well as how each climaxes

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by Anonymous11/24/12

You should have Jenny get involved in three some with meg and her mom, since how horny she is. 8ea

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by bill9846511/26/12

yes

yes to all
thank you
very very good story

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by Anonymous11/27/12

Megan & Karen should take Jenny & her mom back to the club. Both should be dressed the same - heels, stockings, corsets, collars, ball gags and blindfolds. They should be used by their mistresses then taken to the govenors where they are forced to fuck each other

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by Anonymous11/28/12

prom then the club.

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by Anonymous11/29/12

Keep it going

Wow, wow, wow! Please don't stop! How about a slow build to an incestuous hook up for Jenny and her mom!

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by Anonymous12/01/12

Absolutely Wonderful!!

You are quite a talented writer. Keep going!! What makes sense to me is that,
She goes on the guy date, and finds out he's gay and is 'straight curious', and therefore free to be with Ashley. The part about her need to be dominated makes a wonderful conflict with her Girlfriend relationship. Explore that more.

Besides, Megan isn't done with Karen?!?! She's been very bad! Wouldn't be surprised if she was upstairs tied down with a vibe in her and a butt plug, and the straight curious guy! What a way to arrive home!

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by Anonymous12/01/12

PROM!!!

Please I really want this whole prom thing to pan out!

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by Anonymous12/10/12

continue

can i vote for all of the options?

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by Anonymous12/14/12

Great Story!

I definitely want Jenny and Ashley live happily ever after, but after the way that Karen has been acting in the last few chapters I think that she should end up being the bottom slave of this group. Also no on the incest I think, too many domination stories involve that. I think it would be more interesting if both mother and daughter knew they lived this lifestyle and accepted it.

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by Hillbilly_one12/18/12

By far the best!

THis last chapter was by far the best one in the series, for me at least. I love the romance between Jenny and AShley, and I truly believe THAT should be your focus from this point on, with quest performances (of course) by all the other characters. By the way, it seems that all the characters have sort of paired up now. Mistress Megan has Jenny's mom. Karen has Sabrina, and Jenny has Ashley. So it could be quite straight forward, should you want it to be.. OR it could get a bit complicated, while Jenny figures out how to deal with her dual Mitresses and her mom. All in all though, I really do hope that you let her and Ashley be happy and in love together. And I think Ashley would make a perfect Mistress in training.

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by Anonymous12/28/12

Yes

Yes to the prom, the club, the school and Senator Green, and you could convince me of the incest.

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by Anonymous12/28/12

I really hope u make chapter 7 and continue with what happens at school the next day.
PS. I'm going 2 finish reading the rest of your stories until u do make it hopefully.

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by verbalkint112/28/12

Superb story

I would have to say this series has been superb and some of the best erotic writing I have read. I would love to read about Jenny and mom discovering each other, but in a slightly more gentle, slow way. Then the prom and going to the club would be superb. Have to say I could read about the club and nothing else. Keep up the great writing and thank you. Maybe one of these days I will finally write something of my own.

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by Anonymous12/29/12

Second time around

Just finished reading the story for the second time. Certainly would like to see you continue the story. Any and all of the different scenarios would be interesting. Best to you... BR@bs.net

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by hoosier7601/01/13

Another outstanding series. It's amazing how as a reader I can become so emotionally involved with your characters! Please continue this series!!!!

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by Anonymous01/02/13

Great story

I would have to say this series has been superb and some of the best erotic writing My wife have read. We would love to read about Jenny and mom discovering each other, but in a slightly more gentle, slow way,along with ashley and the teacher. Then the prom and going to the club would be great. Keep up the great writing and thank you. Maybe one of these days I will finally write something of my own.

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by Anonymous01/05/13

I think you should write some more. Don't make Jenny and her mom do that act though. But another trip to that lez club with Aslhey would be a fun one to watch.

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by Anonymous01/06/13

Hmmm

AMAZING SERIES DEFF ONE OF THE BEST!!!! So why should it end?
In my opinion you should continue in school after Sunday and hav senator green there And Jenny should deff go to prom with Ashley! But no incest plz blech

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by Anonymous01/12/13

Love this series

Just finished reading all the current chapters, very hot story.

What I think should happen in the next chapter:
Jenny's mom's POV, talking with Megan and then Megan taking Jenny's mom out top the club for a 'moms night out' date... Maybe including meeting with the Senator.

Karen's POV, first punishing Jenny for not answering sooner, then a scene where she's dominating Jenny and Ashley.

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by Anonymous01/19/13

More

Jenny becomes mistress of the two girls she sits next to in class. Another trip to the club too x

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by Anonymous01/22/13

Make more please

Make more! I love it. You should do a thing where Jenny and her mom drink beers together, then have some fun :)

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by Jogrinde01/27/13

Carry on She is only 18!

She deserves to have more great adventures!
Yes to all of the items below:
Also M. Megan should take Karen as her Student and guide her in the art of being a mistress and guide her to maturity after she presents Jennys mum to her!
Should Jenny and her mother commit the ultimate sin...incest? Yes under the guidence and punishment of her Mistress Megan!
Should I continue with what happens at school the next day after her sinful Sunday? Yes, Ashleys/ (Jenny) dominant side should be drawn out as this happens and she takes ownership of Jenny/Ashley from Karen!
Should I bring back Senator Green from part 2? Yeah why not she's great politician
Should Jenny go to prom with Ashley where they all end up at Le Château Club? Yes, this would be good for Ashley and Mistress Megan can be there with Jennys Mum.

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by Anonymous02/04/13

continue please?

could u continue with what happens at school please?

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by sinfulwolf02/08/13

I've read quite a few of your stories, but this is my first comment. I always get tugged along by the kinky, and love reading it. But the way this twisted into something of a romance, well... I've always been a bit of a romantic. I love Ashley and Jenny getting together, and would love to see a relationship actually work between the two, along with Jenny's other sexual needs. But that's just me.
Thank you so much for all your writing and sharing it all with the world. I should post some of my own stuff up on this site sometime. Thank you again.

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by Anonymous02/09/13

Loved them all.

All of the above!!!!!

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by Anonymous02/19/13

school

i think you should say more about karen punishing jenny and ashley taking jenny for a ride down sex lane. plz u have to write more. how else am i going to masterbuate myself to sleep?

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by Anonymous02/24/13

great story

great story don't stop writing please

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by Anonymous03/10/13

Want more but I don't like the idea of incest

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by apollo9003/29/13

Continue this please

This is definitely not a happy ending! Too many things are left hanging. Not sure we need to get into incest (both mother and daughter seemed aghast at the thought...), but they will (must?) do what Mistress demands. For Karen, my thought, since she knew Jenny was on a date with Ashley, Mistress Megan should stop Karen from domineering Jenny. Very convoluted but overall an excellent series... hope you plan on continuing it. Do enjoy reading all your material.

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by Baddogdon04/02/13

Continue the story

I like the prom idea for continuing the story. I hope you do more

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by Anonymous04/11/13

one vote for incest

I'm in favor of Jenny and her mother getting into a steamy, incestuous lesbian relationship. I suppose you could have Karen or Megan tempt and manipulate them into it, or maybe they just dump Karen and Megan and get into it totally by themselves, unable to resist despite the taboo. I'd also like to see the Jenny-Ashley romantic relationship progress, and Jenny's Mom get sexually involved with Ashley as well.

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by Anonymous04/16/13

senator green?

governor green.

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by Anonymous04/20/13

I like incent and prom

I think Jenny and mother should do something and Meg train Karen some more and Ashley and Jenny should go to the prom.

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