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Bedding the Babysitter Ch. 06

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by Boxcarbill01/24/14

Oh my...

I truly hope you continue to keep this story going.... I think Karen needs to fade out and be brought down a peg by Sabrina and a couple of the Cheerleaders. A continuation of Jenny and Ashley and their Mom's as well as Megan. I think the girls need to work on Wanda and draw her into their group with her being dominated by Jenny and Ashley. But you will figure it out.

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by Anonymous01/28/14

need more

incest and prom and to the club

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by Anonymous02/02/14

School the next day- yes
Senetor green- yes
Incest - maybe?
Club- deffiantly
Will be looking for the next chapter!!

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by Anonymous02/16/14

Prom idea

I think that the prom idea is the best but I would like to hear about what Karen tries to do to jenny. I also like the idea of incest but I think that the prom idea should be the main idea. This should be at most two chapters.

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by Anonymous02/19/14

incest and more

I like the incest part more but think the other ideas are good too, maybe you can work all of them in? but I love this series can't wait for more or something close to or the same.

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by Anonymous03/09/14

NO to incest...

...but yes to everything else. You can squeeze a lot of sex out of this bunch without resorting to incest, which has already been ruled out by the characters themselves. I think it'd be way cooler for Ashley to finally meet Megan and learn exactly why Jenny lives the sub life she does... that is, after she discovers Her dom side in the bathroom at prom! Also, you are an AMAZING writer and your stories are an inspiration.

-Sledgehammer720, who can't sign in to his account on his work computer.

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by Evangeline2203/11/14

Prom and the Senator

I don't think you should do an incest scene with Jenny and her mom unless its to please Karen and Megan at the same time. I do think that you should lead off with how Mrs. Wyatt got herself into the position of being between Megan's legs. The next installment being what happens the next day at school when she meets up with Karen and what she is told to do for a punishment while dealing with the fact that she and her teacher have had sex. After that Prom night should happen where Jenny tells Tylor that she can't go to prom with him and instead goes to prom with Ashley. Which leads to them going to the club afterwards and seeing Senator Green again. That's just a thought wave for you take it how you will but I would love to see more of this story played out its amazing and I've enjoyed reading every line of it over and over again.

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by Anonymous03/23/14

i agree

I agree with all of the above suggestions for how this series should go on plus there is the matter of Karen`s mum been seduced as well,plus what happens to Sabrina and the rest of the cheerleaders

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by Anonymous03/26/14

Incest!!!

You have to do the incest please!!!

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by blahhead81804/07/14

Definitely prom with Ashley, everything else is up to you.

I think this was a great last chapter, but if you add another chapter Jenny should continue dating Ashley. Great series!

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by Olddog1304/07/14

My comments - Love the story line !!

>First, Karen must become Jenny's sub slut. Jenny needs a sub, and Karen's ther best one to go that way. Karen's too demanding.
>Jenny and Ashley should become a couple.
>Jenny's Mom and Megan should become a triad with Karen's Mom.
>Jenny and her Mom start walking around the house naked, and Jenny is her Mom's House Mistress. Yes, the Incest angle should be explored, probably with Megan guding Jenny and her Mom, and Karen and her Mom also.

This story is SO FUCKING HOT !! Loved it all. I read on my iPod Touch and after I change pages in a story section I have to make the page and text bigger. It's a pain, but with this story, it's not as bad as with other stories. After I read all the chapters, I had to go change my underwear because I had dripped so much precum. You also made me cum twice with your descriptions. Wonderful story. Now to reas all of your others.

Thanks so much for posting them on Literotica.

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by AngelsKiss04/08/14

Incest

You should go with the incest. That would be so hot!!!

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by Anonymous04/09/14

My comments.

would love for it to continue with everything you mentioned. The more stories the better.

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by Anonymous04/09/14

1, 2, & 4

I agree with old dog completely

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by Anonymous04/17/14

Story continuation

Loving all you work so far Silkstockinglover.
For me the story need to follow Jenny and Ashley- should they now become the slaves of Jenny's teacher? whilst Jenny's mum and Karen become slaves to Megan?

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by Anonymous04/26/14

Senator Green

You've included Daphne Green in so many of your stories, you should give her a story of her own, a bit of background context about her, so we actually get to know something about her, other than that she is a kinky politician that frequents a lesbian club, to seduce young submissive girls. She has the potential to be a great character, she just needs some depth.

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by missnotti05/22/14

senator Green

Bringing back senator Green would be a good idea.

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by Anonymous05/22/14

Authors note

Hi all,
I have tried writing the next chapter for over a year and finally have finished what will be potentially if part 7 is liked a multi-part continuation.

Part 7 is at the editors and hopefully ready for release in the next couple of weeks

Jasmine may 2014

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by bierce06/07/14

All of the above

Great story. Thank you

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by Anonymous08/12/14

great stories

I found your stories very interesting. I hope that you add more chapters to this story. I would enjoy reading more about Jenny and seeing how she and ashley become a couple. Keep up the great writing.

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by Anonymous01/29/15

Looking for ch. 7

You have a great story going, keep it going.

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by Anonymous06/04/15

NoNo Maybe?

I don't think the Governor really has a place in this story now, and Ashley would be distinctley out of place at the Le Chateau. Should Mother and Daughter commit incest? Well, I don't know. I think that they are accepting of each other, but not really romantically so, so I just can't really see it. I think Karen needs to be reigned in by Mistress Megan. She is out of control and too much of a show-off to have people's personal secrets in her possesion. Too much she knows about everyone in this story. Mistress Megan needs to have a stronger hold on her as she is the kind of person who would just say,"I am the Mistress now, and I'll expose you all if you don't obey". And she could, with her popularity, influence, and family money. Already she is texting demands to Jenny even though Karen knows Jenny is on a date with Ashley. So, to wrap up. The Governator is done with, LeChateau has served it's purpose, Sandra is probably no longer a threat, mother is a question mark, Karen is potentially a destructive element to several lives, and Mistress Megan seems to be the sole voice of reason at this point. Helping Jenny to discover herself and seduce Karen. Get Jenny a makeover and a well-paying job. Advising Jenny with her self-confidence troubles, helping her deal with her mother, and then going over and befriending Jenny's mother - comforting her that she can submit to someone stable mentally.

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by Anonymous07/15/15

I agree with much of what NoNo Maybe? said...

Jenny and her mom? No
Continue with what happens at school the next day? Yes.*
Senator Green (and her daughter)? I think spin-off story would be a much more suitable idea.
Jenny and Ashley should go to the Prom, but not end up at the club because it doesn't fit for those two.
*Karen needs to be put in her place by Megan, or someone she fears, because she's becoming too much of a monster.

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by Anonymous08/20/15

PROM!

Jenny and Ashley should go to prom and let their relationship develop more

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by Anonymous09/03/15

incest

i think she should have her mother tied up and everyone takes turns fucking her with her daughter being lasg to eat her mother

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by Anonymous09/22/15

I think Jenny and Ashley are great and you should build on that, also Karen and Susan how they develop and Megan over looking it all as the matriarch

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by Anonymous09/23/15

Please continue

I loved reading all 6 chapters. You have a great way of detailing the story. Would love to see Jenny's story continued. All of your ideas of ways to go sound great.

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by Anonymous10/28/15

Thresome

How about Jenny,Karren and her mum!

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by maddict01/16/16

Wonderful story.

Evan if I'm excluded for my gender. Does everyone have to be dominated ? Ashly and Jenny seem to be onto a warm relasionship. No mother daughter, this story might not be the place, and incest is creepy. You have many couples who can be together for me to enjoy. Always wanting more, does Rebecca still draw girl art, and that is very good girl art. I'm sure you've told her. I'm trying to find her site.a A new tradition illustration that has me dreaming a woman on a table has spilled her box on cornflakes. Wow.

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by Anonymous01/25/16

Prom!!!

Please don't end it here. I wanna know what happens to Jenny and Ashley. I'm going die. You left me on a big cliff hanger here. I would really love to know what happens to them. I mean it's prom. So many things could happen. (Hopefully them breaking up isnt one of those) 🙏 please keep going. Your are truly gifted.

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by Anonymous02/09/16

Superb series! I read them all, and loved them. You are quite gifted. I would like to see a serious, mature relationship developed between Jenny and Ashley.

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by Anonymous04/25/16

INCEST! AND ASHLEY AND JENNY

No more karen because she pulls everyone away start an incest with obviously jenny and her mom and continue jenny and ashley's life story/love

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by Anonymous05/05/16

Mix it up..great job so far

Karen using Sabrina and Jenny's mom in a threesome forcing Sabrina to be Jenny's mom's sub while Jenny and her girlfriend are watching and playing on their own.

Teacher submitting to megan and wearing a viberator which karen controls in class

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by Anonymous06/27/16

Don't stop!!

This is only my opinion but this isn't the right story for insest.. The love story between Ashley and Jenny should be explored more! Defs write about the prom! And like I said this is only my opinion but Karen seems to be too hardcore, like when she made Susan tell Jenny the whole story how she subbed to Karen and tt made the mother daughter relationship between Susan and Jenny all awkward and stuff, she takes it a bit too far sometimes, like calling Susan a cunt and stuff in front of Jenny while they try have a honest mother to daughter convo. But I think Jenny and Ashley should definitely lot stop there. If you wanted to keep the submission theme going then Ashley could develop a liking to being a dominator, doesn't have to be extreme since she is a shy girl but there relation could spark something new? Love the story and have read all chapters and some more than ones :)

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by Anonymous06/30/16

Thanks fr th flls

Even though this is one of the sexiest stories I've ever read, it also made me quite sad at the end as I recently broke up with my girlfriend and started dating a guy. But I miss her...? What's wrong with me?!

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by Anonymous12/03/16

Beautiful, heartfelt story!

I love it...I cried at so many points and could neither stop reading or touching myself! Please have Jenny and Susan start an incestuous relationship...and possibly experience some whipping, flogging, and bondage together. Three tau crosses for Karen, Susan, and Jenny? :)

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by Anonymous01/18/17

incest!

incest

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by Synister04/02/17

All

you do all 4. explore all the aspects of them. cause in all reality you opened the door for the stories already and if you do an incest one then include the Governors daughter with them.

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by Anonymous04/17/17

Really u can't stop

U r kidding right there r so many more things how about Jenny seducing Ashley's mom and what about miss Morgan come on can't stop here

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by Anonymous04/29/17

more

Plz write more

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by Anonymous05/31/17

Incest!

Definitely incest between Jenny and her mom and a threesome with Ashley. Perhaps a foursome between the three of them and Ms. Morgan.

Ashleys father finds out about them and confronts Jenny and her mom in anger and rapes them both out? Ashley walks in and is raped also.

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by KrazyTaz1207/04/17

HOT HOT

Wow love your stories . I love them. I am a guy and yes I do like these kind of stores. I am straight but my Father was bi/gay more gay but loved him as my dad. He passed away last year. I have not been with a male willing I was molested as a child and have no desire to be with a man I love pussy to much .so I just want to tell you great job on the stories keep up the great work.

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by Anonymous07/06/17

YOU ARE WITHOUT A DOUBT THE MOST TALENTED WRITER ON LITEROTICA

Whatever you decide to do, to continue the "Bedding the Babysitter" story will be excellent reading and will capture the readers attention from start to finish.

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by Anonymous08/26/17

Please continue...

There are so many things you can explore, all with the backdrop of Jenny and Ashley's love. I. think the parent-teacher conference between Miss Morgan and Jenny's mom has potential. Also, Megan gently seducing the mother-daughter pair. That could be an amazingly gentle and loving scene. Perhaps Megan and mom are together in the new hot tub, inviting Jenny to soak and relax with them... the conversation turning to joyful loving, friendship, delicious sex.

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by Anonymous11/10/17

Nicely understated!

You can keep films, while there are writers like you there will always be good things to savour, especially stories, your kind of stories. Loved it ...all of it, please keep writing!!!

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by MAJOR0411/11/17

JENNY

The mom and daughter should be a regular with Megan and Karen also. please do not bring the GOV/SEN back into the relationship but maybe her daughter????? The teacher should take JENNY'S love from Ashley that was a really hot hookup..Jenny and her mom visit Rosie in the bathroom...

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by Rastanura12/05/17

Great

I have no idea where this should go, but keep up the good work.

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by AZTanDan01/07/18

More Jenny and Ashley

The relationship has blossomed and in my opinion should be the next logical addition to a superb series.

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by Anonymous01/08/18

Ultimate

Jenny and Ashley remain a couple but not exclusive. Both are repeatedly seduced, first lovingly by teacher, then by mom and neighbor Miss Morgan who feverishly fist them both taking turns/swapping. Jenny is driven home again and subduction by Ashley’s dad he takes her anal cherry. Miss Karen takes teacher’s anal cherry and controls her. Football team gets involved and has their way with the girls to keep quite.
I enjoyed your writing very much!

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