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Keep going!!
Next episode tomorrow?
i am loving this
but can she pleeeeease start moving past acting like a skittish little rabbit?
Please
Please keep going! Can't wait for more
Please write more
Please please write more and more often :)
I love this story
Please get an editor!
"Its going to happen again...."
I repeated to myself and I knew it was going to happen soon! Hehe!
Author Comment:
Re the frequent “get an editor” comments that I keep getting on the public and private feedback; I’ve never had any luck in finding an editor, indeed it’s meant that over the years I’ve been unable to post some of my stories on LIT site.
I’m sorry that my poor editing is ruining my efforts for some of you but my philosophy has always been that if the story is good enough then the reader will overlook some of the errors, if all you are doing is looking for the mistakes; then maybe my story isn’t for you?
For all those people who are enjoying this story and have been voting and commenting – you have my heartfelt thanks.
A lovely story.
More! More! More!
Next Chapter Please!
I am enjoying this story just as I have your previous ones.
Please continue writing and posting your stories.
I don't come to a free internet site expecting "polished" stories.
I do hope to find people with the gift of telling stories,
Thank You for sharing your gift.
The only problem...
I hate having to wait for more. I have been loving your stories. I just wish I did not need to wait.
I think you're doing a great job with the story - admittedly I like my female characters a little stronger but thats a personal choice. I don't find your editting badly done. Can't wait for more.....keep writing! :)
arrrrgggghhhhh!
The pain of waiting for such an awesome story! I could cry! I really could!
MORE!!!
This story is like quicksand!
I stepped in on chapter one and have been stuck ever since! Thanks
I love the tension that you string between your characters and the depth of your story! Good work!
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