All Comments on 'Cindy Ch. 02'

by Dennis_St_John

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GingerVyeGingerVyealmost 12 years ago
I am groaning

I just whined out loud... "Nooooo I want more! This is too short and driving me mad"

I will wait patiently in the corner

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Kill me

Nooooo I wanted it to continue. That is a punishment sir. Update soon.

Encre NoireEncre Noirealmost 12 years ago

The abrupt ending was cruel. I look forward to the next chapter.

MaynessMaynessalmost 12 years ago

Thats mean! Come on don't keep us waiting too long! Another good chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Love the story

Leaving the section unfinished destroyed the story to a certain extent. It does leave the reader in suspense about what happens but you did not complete the chapter and so took something away from the story. Otherwise this is great writing - I love it. 5 Stars!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

More please.

barepussloverbarepussloveralmost 12 years ago
OH!!

That was short and wanting! Perhaps a good spanking is in order with bondage?

barepussloverbarepussloveralmost 12 years ago
OH!!

Left wanting! Thinking a little bondage and spanking is in order!!

davinedavineover 10 years ago
Good but!

A few spelling errors but still an exciting read.

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