by Dennis_St_John
I just whined out loud... "Nooooo I want more! This is too short and driving me mad"
I will wait patiently in the corner
Nooooo I wanted it to continue. That is a punishment sir. Update soon.
Leaving the section unfinished destroyed the story to a certain extent. It does leave the reader in suspense about what happens but you did not complete the chapter and so took something away from the story. Otherwise this is great writing - I love it. 5 Stars!
That was short and wanting! Perhaps a good spanking is in order with bondage?
Left wanting! Thinking a little bondage and spanking is in order!!