All Comments on 'Playing Up Ch. 03'

Most arousing and well written !

Gwlad you thought about the curtains:-) D A

My favourite part was when he was wanking like a piston fisted gibbon.

Glad you got through your writer's block!

well arf tidy

I can detect inspiration from the "is Shit" place!

Thanks for popping in, bois. I like to think it was more inspiration from That Place than anything else.

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I'd just like to make it completely clear - that was fecking hot. Writer's block my arse.

If this were a chapter out of a novel I might ask for a little less jumpiness in the character development, but it's still way out in front of most of what I've read on Lit. I don't need a "happily ever after" ending, but the one you've given it is close to that and still realistic. Thanks!

Really enjoyed the 3 parts so far...any other installments? Have to say, loved that cwtch made its way in too!!

In answer to Niki and other queries I've received, the BDSM-themed 'Playing Power Games' follows this story, and I have started on a sequel to that, plus other shorts stories may be uploaded here.

(Full-length 'Harford Scarlet' novels under my pen name 'Toria Lyons' are soon to be published by Xcite; I'll try to keep my biography updated.)

Thank you.

Toria aka redzinger