All Comments on 'Blackmailing My Niece'

Never mind the story, I think that's the silliest spelling of the name Michaela I've ever seen!

Wow, this was bad.

Me.... Your story really sucked. I mean, bad.

Grammar errors and changing of the tense from past to present...just didn't do it for me.

Please..the word is shuddered. I don't think she was putting up shutters was she ???

Are you trying to write the script for a bad porno? Learn to use quotation marks.

That thought this story was bad,,,,

and stop trying to write. You can't.

How any of the one's that said it was bad posted there owe????

Don;t give up! I would like to hear how she returns the disc.

Maybe with her Mother your sister?????

Good Luck :)

Loved it..

It doesn't get much worse that this. The writing is like an 8th grade dropout and the plot is like a boom chicka boom boom porno film. Do us all a favor, don't write again, just go back to your parent's bathroom and jerk off on your own.

i liked it, it was a good story you have good potential. keep it up

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......first taste of her amazing little snatch was 12 years ago...she even brought her little sister along...and they both tasted so so delisious....i tried to slide into my favorite niece, but i was so hard and swollin that i could only rub the tip up and down her very wett little slit...we both even pushed hard into each other...she was lusting for me then and today is still the same.....we are seriuosly considering moving to Hawaii and starting new as husband and wife. but i loved her idea even more better. She- the 18 year old hooker that looks, tastes, and even feels no more than 12 every morning, noon, and night when we take time for us 2 fuck each others brains out then fuckem back again. she now squirts continuously as we enjoy hard fucking until t scream at her pretty little pussy how much i love and lust her fucking fuck body...as she straddles me and reminds me why im event here....so she can fuck and fuck and fuck and suck her uncle all she wants...3 times a day atleast...sometimes 4-5 times a day...ooh,i gotta go ....she just walked in from her HighSchool classes...i fuckin cum all over myself every time t think about that ftirst day she came upto me in the shower. got in without saying a word and bit my hard dick as hard as she could causing me to become the hardest man on planet earth...oh did i mention that shes 7 weeks pregnant now and now shes fucking old 60-90 year old men for 20 dollars to cum inher pussy as much as they want in an hour...fuck, shes truly amazing...i just nutted in my pants again...only she has this affect onmee...and i love her for it with all my fuckin dick every time im pounding her love tunnel, staring into her eyes and licking her face then pussy lipps then the hole mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm..bye.

Great start, can't wait for next chapter!

i recall the first time my uncle played with me I was only 19 and only hand one person ever touch me i'd just lost my virginity to my first love he was a quick cummer in and out anyway went to my uncle he'd got me tix to a show I wanted to see make a long story short we'd went out to eat after the show and he had a few drinks so I drove us to his place which I had planned on staying at anyway, when we got inside next thing I know were kissing and touching he looked at I said please make love to me. we did it all night he put so much cum inside me that night and many nights afterwards, we've lived as a couple now 7 yrs (no kids) but he's the lover I always knew I wanted

Nice story.

Need Macayla to visit more often.