Blackmailing My Niece

The girl's name?

Never mind the story, I think that's the silliest spelling of the name Michaela I've ever seen!

Wow, this was bad.

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Me.... Your story really sucked. I mean, bad.

not so much

Grammar errors and changing of the tense from past to present...just didn't do it for me.
Please..the word is shuddered. I don't think she was putting up shutters was she ???

What is this?

Are you trying to write the script for a bad porno? Learn to use quotation marks.

So I wasn't the only one,,,,,,,,

That thought this story was bad,,,,

Do the Lit world a favour

and stop trying to write. You can't.

Nice

How any of the one's that said it was bad posted there owe????
Don;t give up! I would like to hear how she returns the disc.
Maybe with her Mother your sister?????
Good Luck :)

Great

Loved it..

Ugh

It doesn't get much worse that this. The writing is like an 8th grade dropout and the plot is like a boom chicka boom boom porno film. Do us all a favor, don't write again, just go back to your parent's bathroom and jerk off on your own.

good

i liked it, it was a good story you have good potential. keep it up

love sex always wanted a threesome.

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