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Mom Strips Naked for Nude Day Ch. 14

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by Brockstud07/21/12

I kind of agree

It might be better to upload two chapters as 1 but I completely disagree with garbage. What we've experienced is anticipation and it's realistic. A mother is often going to have second thoughts about crossing that line with her son so hesitation is expected.

I know I commented on this previously but I can't express enough how refreshing it is to have a written mother that doesn't just spread her legs because her son has a massive dick.

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by BonoVox9907/21/12

Robot speak at it again

"Yet, now I realize for me to write my story, I need to act, as if I'm just a man with a woman on a hot date and not a son with his mother in the living room at home."


I-am-a-sex-crazed-robot. I-do-not-talk-like-anyone-does-in-real-life. My-dialogue-is-incredibly-lame. Nothing-about-my-story-is-natural.

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by nolank07/22/12

Don't Stop

This is just the next step not the end of the story surely.

You need to think thru the reasons they will move from one posiiton to another, enjoying several high moments. Won't hurt to review previous moments in their lives when they teased each other. Confessing true feelings. Exhausted to refreshed after this night is over. Hope there will be many days of after the mountain top to more escalating stimulation. Lets see how original you can continue to be.

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by laurensi8807/22/12

You are ONE BIG TEASER!!

I left comment on how long winded this is, but i kept coming back! Some writers were too impatient and left us no room for imagination...Good work!

(if this becomes a trend, i couldn't beat myself anymore....!)

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