very entertaining but some moments brought me back to reality while reading it like "champagne and caviar" , "unzipping". Caviar is from Caspian Sea and was primerely eaten by Russians, Persians and the Azerbaijanians. It made it to Europe in a much later in time. UNZIPPING - hello!!!! Zippers, really????????? Good story, but thous errors "zap" you back from it.
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Anonymous07/23/12
why not zippers?
The zipper comment didn't throw me because I could see it was set in modern times. No fairy tale included micro mini skirts or jeans.
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Anonymous10/20/12
What?
She didnt want to kiss him bc he was eating bugs but she let he eat her pussy? Who does that!? Ewww XP
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The story was
very entertaining but some moments brought me back to reality while reading it like "champagne and caviar" , "unzipping". Caviar is from Caspian Sea and was primerely eaten by Russians, Persians and the Azerbaijanians. It made it to Europe in a much later in time. UNZIPPING - hello!!!! Zippers, really????????? Good story, but thous errors "zap" you back from it.
why not zippers?
The zipper comment didn't throw me because I could see it was set in modern times. No fairy tale included micro mini skirts or jeans.
What?
She didnt want to kiss him bc he was eating bugs but she let he eat her pussy? Who does that!? Ewww XP
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